Item: I am that male friend in the harem story
Rating: 2
Author: Naigelton

NaigeltonLv25mth

2024-09-22 23:31

i kinda lost intrest in the story , im at chapter 33. He got a Girlfreind and he is fixing himself up whats more to read about ? .. i mean i could understand if this was an harem story but it seems its not ? so again whats there to read about ? are we just waiting for the drama thats going to happend when all the girls who are intrested in him gets to know he got a girlfreind and thats it ? a slice of life for 10 years in that world .. its kinda bland honestly.... i mean it already feel like im just reading the after scenes of a finished manga right now there is nothing more to do or to discover in that world or in this scenario ? ... so yeah i gave it a low score cause its just so bland... nothing really happends mc is your typical japanese protoganist .. writing is ok, story itself is going nowhere really and its slow and bland its not really good or bad it just is ...

I am that male friend in the harem story

akikan40

4.5

200 Chs

Liked by 14 people

Replies3

Amadeus_MOZARTLv4

how's his girlfriend ?

5mth

NaigeltonLv2

dont remember her name , but it was a girl who talked shit and "bullied" the protoganist character b4 our current mc was born into his body ...

Amadeus_MOZART:how's his girlfriend ?

5mth

BrazillianFoxLv4

Onodera, but has already gained interest from Tsubame, Chika, Kaguya and probably her servant,Iino, and other girls at school.Without Iino's friend Kobachi, who literally became a pervert out of nowhere who kind of 'attacks' him... I just don't know why I stopped after that.

Amadeus_MOZART:how's his girlfriend ?

5mth

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venom_hunt_041199Lv4

it clearly needs more character development and the plot is reverting to your same old style. it is also so 2013. your story design and romantic ventures are good for bit style play, but completely fails from the propective of story-side novel view. I used to like your stories very much but now I find them going through the same old cliques. girls falling for the fake bravado act of protags and protags screwing friends gf's by some hypocritical moral superiority. and most importantly haircuts does change a person's look but not his personality and others perspective( one of your main cliques, it does help a persons own self-esteem though). also stop trying to make the protag a pariah when he is some loser who got lucky by getting a system and feels like he is losing out by getting a girlfriend. I mean it is harem story but try to develop each character's story so that they won't feel like empty text.

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