Naigelton

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well... that came way to fast.. i mean thats the end boss why r u writing about him now lol ? ... the dude have not even been in 1 tournament or left 1 region and ur already putting the world boss and the god of that world infront off him... fix ur pasing ... there is a reason why ur not seeing arceus in the first seasons in pokemon lol this is something im expeting to read in chapter 300 + or something lol not in chapter 40 these type of extreme danger level came way to fast now when ur writing a " vililan" they are just going to seem meh cuz we know there is a fucking dragon able to battle the pokemon god out there waiting for us , sin look like a squirtel and all of a sudden not so important anymore...

awesome :D

what race is our mc ? ... still trying to figureing it out -_-

shizune and jiraya must be the most disgusting couple that i could ever hear about ... srsly .. tsunade is like a mother for shizune and now when he givev up on the mother he will go for the daughter instead lol ...

it seems good , the prologue almost made me want to puke tho ..way to long

what is this korean shit ?...

this seems more apropiet because of how her own mother looks likes

lol you posted Rhaellas appearance then you post this ... she looks like an abandoned cow with some sickness compared to her own mother lol

thats the chick behind the walls not targarayan