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IreallylikereadingLv48mth
2024-09-12 03:43

im making this review 5 stars as soon as he goes for kei or chika, preferably kei since theres too much chika without any kei for some reason. kei is a great character filled with potential but people keep ignoring her, heck i have only seen one fanfic where they go for kei and that was indirectly literally just an accidental charm.

I am that male friend in the harem story

akikan40
4.5
276 Chs

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venom_hunt_041199
venom_hunt_041199Lv4

it clearly needs more character development and the plot is reverting to your same old style. it is also so 2013. your story design and romantic ventures are good for bit style play, but completely fails from the propective of story-side novel view. I used to like your stories very much but now I find them going through the same old cliques. girls falling for the fake bravado act of protags and protags screwing friends gf's by some hypocritical moral superiority. and most importantly haircuts does change a person's look but not his personality and others perspective( one of your main cliques, it does help a persons own self-esteem though). also stop trying to make the protag a pariah when he is some loser who got lucky by getting a system and feels like he is losing out by getting a girlfriend. I mean it is harem story but try to develop each character's story so that they won't feel like empty text.

8mth

WebTalk
WebTalkLv4

Can You Make Attack on Titan Fanfiction without Travel between Worlds 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

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FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6

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vitaminC
vitaminCLv2

over all it’s basic fanfiction where loser dude with past life memories and he don’t know what to do about his new life, so the author gave him a system then telling him to chase one girl or all the heroine, and I’ve no clue why the girls suddenly become so clingy, what’s good from this is the update stability

8mth
Dr_Chad
Dr_ChadLv13

First to review deserves more likes I always follow this formula.. Akikan=5*

9mth
Garland
GarlandLv4

If you have ever read any works done by the author then this one is pretty much the same. The mc, the writing and pretty much the whole concept of the story is the same. The MC is always fake and somehow it gains him some girls. Heck, sometimes the whole story completely becomes opposite to what the Title is such as with "Riser Phenex isn't a villain" and "MHA: Living as Mineta is hard". Same old character with the same old story that i don't believe that the author will ever change or improve on. The whole concept of him being the male friend in a harem story would could have been interesting but it is immediately pushed away and turn into the same story. Like really, this gets 5 stars.

7mth
CamlEnvy
CamlEnvyLv4

I can't say much about the FF since it only has 3 chapters, but it was an interesting start. Now, if the MC follows the path of his last 4/5 FF's, we already know that it will be a shitty read and as we have already been warned that we will have him traveling to other worlds, if he follows the last FF I will change everything to one star. I really like the author Akikan, I read all his stories, but in recent years his writing has been falling a lot, I hope this is the return to cool stories to read and not just about NSFW and an idiotic MC who thinks with D **K. I really like you Akikan, change for the better soon.

9mth
BrazillianFox
BrazillianFoxLv4

To be honest, it's the same story as the author's other fics,It's kind of annoying that women just throw themselves at MC, not to mention how he keeps saying something like 'I'm a gentleman',he won a reward for conquering a girl, but even if he won and simply lives in this world as Ishigami, no,he literally says he's only going to stay for 10 years and change the world (which isn't mentioned once that he can),To be honest, there have been so many ridiculous things here that it's not worth reading if you have a bit of critical sense.If you search for 10 minutes you will find something in the same style with a much better plot.

7mth
Naigelton
NaigeltonLv2

i kinda lost intrest in the story , im at chapter 33. He got a Girlfreind and he is fixing himself up whats more to read about ? .. i mean i could understand if this was an harem story but it seems its not ? so again whats there to read about ? are we just waiting for the drama thats going to happend when all the girls who are intrested in him gets to know he got a girlfreind and thats it ? a slice of life for 10 years in that world .. its kinda bland honestly.... i mean it already feel like im just reading the after scenes of a finished manga right now there is nothing more to do or to discover in that world or in this scenario ? ... so yeah i gave it a low score cause its just so bland... nothing really happends mc is your typical japanese protoganist .. writing is ok, story itself is going nowhere really and its slow and bland its not really good or bad it just is ...

7mth
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