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Z_Ril
Z_RilLv142mth
2024-09-27 09:33

It's going to be honest with you author. The out of country arc is wayyy too long. we don't really care about it. we just want to see canon already. make a large time skip pls. we want to see jjk, not minato traveling the world.

The yellow flash of jujutsu high

ThePpp_Pppp
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175 Chs

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ThePpp_Pppp
ThePpp_PpppAuthor

Well that would cause a problem, a decently large problem. I am currently on chapter 185 on Wattpad, if I were to do that then we’ll….i would have to go weeks on end without updating the book as it take a while, some stuff must be shared for it to make sense. Also ever since the India trip I learn my lesson, the other trips are shorter and have less word description to drag on, if I were to a skip right now. It would skip to Keitaro and Gojo fight again and some romance stuff between Keitaro and Shoko and once that done, basically no chapter for a few weeks or months.

2mth
Z_Ril
Z_RilLv14

ThePpp_Pppp:Well that would cause a problem, a decently large problem. I am currently on chapter 185 on Wattpad, if I were to do that then we’ll….i would have to go weeks on end without updating the book as it take a while, some stuff must be shared for it to make sense. Also ever since the India trip I learn my lesson, the other trips are shorter and have less word description to drag on, if I were to a skip right now. It would skip to Keitaro and Gojo fight again and some romance stuff between Keitaro and Shoko and once that done, basically no chapter for a few weeks or months.
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ThePpp_Pppp
ThePpp_PpppAuthor

I do try to make up for it with specials and character interaction, Gojo and Keitaro chapters are usually pretty fun to read, though I do get people on WEBNOVEL don’t like the oversea chapters so I will try to speed up

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Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 1/5 because I can't give 0(ZERO) marks Character Design 1/5 World Background 3/5 jujutsu world in the beginning but something original after. I wanted to say that initially, it was a jujutsu kaisen fanfic. Still, after the MC lost 2 out of 2 fights with Gojo Satoru the author lost the ties of the story and turned it into an original shounem fanfic with original characters that are not part of the original jujutsu kaisen manga/anime. He only left the use of cursed energy within this fanfic. If you want an OP MC with the skills, experience, and intelligence equal to Namikaze Minato along with Gojo Satoru then this fic is not for you and not for anyone who wants a jujutsu kaisen fic with an original MC.

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I really liked the story, but we do have to be critical; I would say that there is a lot of dialogue but little action, I want to give my opinion if the author is willing, and I wish Kenjaku was more dangerous than Hera in the original, he was a waste of a villain and died in a very pathetic way, I also want to advise you that they add a new villain at Sukuna's level, I say this because Minato and Gojo would end Sukuna like taking candy from a child and it would be very boring; and that's all my opinion and my review, I really liked it, I expect great things from this story, thank you. ahh another thing, put another shinigami for the MC that is for battle or defense, I would like that a lot 🤧

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I haven't read this yet, but I like the concept, so keep going guys....please don't go on hiatus , that's all, but because writing a review can't be less than 140 words, so I'll write anything

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