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Ahmed_Ragab_1983
Ahmed_Ragab_1983Lv17mth
2024-08-06 07:25

Its actually really good[img=nervous]...................................................................................................................

The yellow flash of jujutsu high

ThePpp_Pppp
4.0
240 Chs

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Miky_Mate
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This is kinda trash I’m ngl, the grammar is horrible (borderline unreadable) the story feels very robotic and emotionless

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ThePpp_Pppp
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Victor_7740
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Clown_Of_God
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Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 1/5 because I can't give 0(ZERO) marks Character Design 1/5 World Background 3/5 jujutsu world in the beginning but something original after. I wanted to say that initially, it was a jujutsu kaisen fanfic. Still, after the MC lost 2 out of 2 fights with Gojo Satoru the author lost the ties of the story and turned it into an original shounem fanfic with original characters that are not part of the original jujutsu kaisen manga/anime. He only left the use of cursed energy within this fanfic. If you want an OP MC with the skills, experience, and intelligence equal to Namikaze Minato along with Gojo Satoru then this fic is not for you and not for anyone who wants a jujutsu kaisen fic with an original MC.

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ivar_001
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Reveal spoiler

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