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ivar_001
ivar_001Lv25mth
2024-10-24 07:41

I really liked the story, but we do have to be critical; I would say that there is a lot of dialogue but little action, I want to give my opinion if the author is willing, and I wish Kenjaku was more dangerous than Hera in the original, he was a waste of a villain and died in a very pathetic way, I also want to advise you that they add a new villain at Sukuna's level, I say this because Minato and Gojo would end Sukuna like taking candy from a child and it would be very boring; and that's all my opinion and my review, I really liked it, I expect great things from this story, thank you. ahh another thing, put another shinigami for the MC that is for battle or defense, I would like that a lot 🤧

The yellow flash of jujutsu high

ThePpp_Pppp
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240 Chs

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ThePpp_Pppp
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I got you for Kenny, he get curious in this story…..very curious….nature energy is an amazing buff……anyway thanks for the review, I will try to work on my dialogues a bit more, make them less but have more hmph to them

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