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Tim_QQQLv18mth
2024-06-13 22:25

another decently written story ruined by sexual deviance, harems and paedophilia. nice bro you just put yourself on a list for writing that i bet

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KaoskiAuthor

Can you not think of our world's common sense while thinking of fiction and their world's common sense? I don't understand why people look at different fictions and their worlds by our world's common sense and think that things common and different in our world should be the same for other worlds. I detach myself from my common sense when I try to right and look for TPP, and that's why it is called Fiction, not reality.

JiwaMiwaLv4

Sexual deviance and paedophilia is just gross no matter what world you're in.

Kaoski:Can you not think of our world's common sense while thinking of fiction and their world's common sense? I don't understand why people look at different fictions and their worlds by our world's common sense and think that things common and different in our world should be the same for other worlds. I detach myself from my common sense when I try to right and look for TPP, and that's why it is called Fiction, not reality.
KaoskiAuthor

.... killing at four isn't gross? The concept of sexual deviance and paedophilia was developed in our world, do you think they even bother about it if they don't bother about killing and massacring? If you think that the life expectancy of Ninjas is around 30-40, maximum of 50, then all the ages of other things are also reduced. Tl;dr: everyone has different views about different things.

JiwaMiwa:Sexual deviance and paedophilia is just gross no matter what world you're in.
ivar_001Lv2

Tengo mi propia opinión sobre eso, y si estoy sincero tienes razón 👍 te apoyo por favor lo abandones💯👍

Kaoski:.... killing at four isn't gross? The concept of sexual deviance and paedophilia was developed in our world, do you think they even bother about it if they don't bother about killing and massacring? If you think that the life expectancy of Ninjas is around 30-40, maximum of 50, then all the ages of other things are also reduced. Tl;dr: everyone has different views about different things.
MarinXGrayfiaLv4

dumb

MarinXGrayfiaLv4

dumb

JiwaMiwa:Sexual deviance and paedophilia is just gross no matter what world you're in.
captainfatbellyLv4

they are fake you are imagining children in your mind it doesn't matter if its a different world especially when you delve into details it just means your a closeted pedrophile i hope on all the children in the world that they never meet you

Kaoski:.... killing at four isn't gross? The concept of sexual deviance and paedophilia was developed in our world, do you think they even bother about it if they don't bother about killing and massacring? If you think that the life expectancy of Ninjas is around 30-40, maximum of 50, then all the ages of other things are also reduced. Tl;dr: everyone has different views about different things.
SunnnnyLv13

You’re entitled to whatever opinions you have regarding any matter; the issue I have is when people begin to berate and attempt to police people, and for this instance, all over non existent, fictional characters. Ideally, when someone finds something they dislike, they drop whatever it was altogether and leave. In the broad spectrum , going all cyber warrior at someone feels meaningless. Unless you get off of doing that, in that case, jeepers.

captainfatbelly:they are fake you are imagining children in your mind it doesn't matter if its a different world especially when you delve into details it just means your a closeted pedrophile i hope on all the children in the world that they never meet you
captainfatbellyLv4

so you like kids? disgusting people who like kids should have no opinion like it or not

Sunnnny:You’re entitled to whatever opinions you have regarding any matter; the issue I have is when people begin to berate and attempt to police people, and for this instance, all over non existent, fictional characters. Ideally, when someone finds something they dislike, they drop whatever it was altogether and leave. In the broad spectrum , going all cyber warrior at someone feels meaningless. Unless you get off of doing that, in that case, jeepers.
KaoskiAuthor

Instead of yapping here, go outside and do something. No one gives a fk about your opinion. I am tired of explaining this, and it's pointless for a doctor to treat a machine the same way as humans. For fks sake, don't use this world's common sense while reading a book and trying to understand that world.

captainfatbelly:so you like kids? disgusting people who like kids should have no opinion like it or not
captainfatbellyLv4

Ok? its not ok to like kids that not really an opinion and if you think that is your really messed up in that noggin of yours you pedrophile you have to put yourself in the mind of characters when you are writing meaning you like kids.

Kaoski:Instead of yapping here, go outside and do something. No one gives a fk about your opinion. I am tired of explaining this, and it's pointless for a doctor to treat a machine the same way as humans. For fks sake, don't use this world's common sense while reading a book and trying to understand that world.
KaoskiAuthor

Hah! You have been saying paedophilia from the start but do you even know what it means? Liking kids isn't paedophilia! Check on the internet and paedophilia is a psychological disorder of experiencing sexual attraction towards prepubescent children. Here in the novel, I for surely wrote that he had experienced puberty, and Tsunade herself checked the situation, physically and mentally to make sure that there wouldn't be a problem. Seriously, before saying something, go and learn about it. Dumb idiot! Also, saying that if your character is a murderer, then you are also a murderer is fking stupid. Ngl, I don't know where you come from, and start preaching without even knowing anything. Don't even understand that everything is relative, the same for concepts and they change from different places, times and let's not even mention that we are talking about different worlds.

captainfatbelly:Ok? its not ok to like kids that not really an opinion and if you think that is your really messed up in that noggin of yours you pedrophile you have to put yourself in the mind of characters when you are writing meaning you like kids.
SunnnnyLv13

Tbh, it isn’t worth engaging a conversation with him any longer. I’ve read some of his reviews; they weren’t exactly ‘helpful’

Kaoski:Hah! You have been saying paedophilia from the start but do you even know what it means? Liking kids isn't paedophilia! Check on the internet and paedophilia is a psychological disorder of experiencing sexual attraction towards prepubescent children. Here in the novel, I for surely wrote that he had experienced puberty, and Tsunade herself checked the situation, physically and mentally to make sure that there wouldn't be a problem. Seriously, before saying something, go and learn about it. Dumb idiot! Also, saying that if your character is a murderer, then you are also a murderer is fking stupid. Ngl, I don't know where you come from, and start preaching without even knowing anything. Don't even understand that everything is relative, the same for concepts and they change from different places, times and let's not even mention that we are talking about different worlds.
captainfatbellyLv4

oops

Kaoski:Hah! You have been saying paedophilia from the start but do you even know what it means? Liking kids isn't paedophilia! Check on the internet and paedophilia is a psychological disorder of experiencing sexual attraction towards prepubescent children. Here in the novel, I for surely wrote that he had experienced puberty, and Tsunade herself checked the situation, physically and mentally to make sure that there wouldn't be a problem. Seriously, before saying something, go and learn about it. Dumb idiot! Also, saying that if your character is a murderer, then you are also a murderer is fking stupid. Ngl, I don't know where you come from, and start preaching without even knowing anything. Don't even understand that everything is relative, the same for concepts and they change from different places, times and let's not even mention that we are talking about different worlds.
Santy_MelayLv1

Let me understand, you criticize pedophilia but not murder? Both are crimes but why do you only criticize one?

SublimenightLv14

Santy_Melay:Let me understand, you criticize pedophilia but not murder? Both are crimes but why do you only criticize one?
Martial_PursuitLv4

murder can be justified Pedo cant

Santy_Melay:Let me understand, you criticize pedophilia but not murder? Both are crimes but why do you only criticize one?
JiwaMiwaLv4

So you would read about 12 year olds breeding with 24 year olds no problem is it. Because it's ok for 4 year olds to kill in Naruto huh. Ok, I guess. You can go further if you want.

Kaoski:.... killing at four isn't gross? The concept of sexual deviance and paedophilia was developed in our world, do you think they even bother about it if they don't bother about killing and massacring? If you think that the life expectancy of Ninjas is around 30-40, maximum of 50, then all the ages of other things are also reduced. Tl;dr: everyone has different views about different things.
KaoskiAuthor

1)Do you think 12-year-old kids in our world and 12-year-old people in Naruto world are the same? 2) Paedophilia is having a sexual interest in prepubescent children. 3) I mentioned that they were fully mature in body and mind, and had experienced puberty. 4) The moral and societal values of both worlds are different. If you can't differentiate between the two, then only read the ones that have the same moral values as yours. 5) There is no 'higher' authority in Naruto World to judge anyone for what they have done. Everything there is based on interest, it doesn't matter if you agree or disagree.

JiwaMiwa:So you would read about 12 year olds breeding with 24 year olds no problem is it. Because it's ok for 4 year olds to kill in Naruto huh. Ok, I guess. You can go further if you want.
KaoskiAuthor

Also, I am sure he meant that why isn't that guy screaming about murder, etc. crimes in Naruto world and only speaking about the thing he mentioned? Let's not even mention massacres, human experiments, brainwashing, using people as tools, etc.

JiwaMiwa:So you would read about 12 year olds breeding with 24 year olds no problem is it. Because it's ok for 4 year olds to kill in Naruto huh. Ok, I guess. You can go further if you want.
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