Item: Game of thrones: The Adventure Ned Stark
Rating: 1
Author: Hocolate

HocolateLv41yr

2024-04-11 15:26

Believe it or not, this novel will be dropped by the author himself. I haven't even read it but I'm not kidding with my assessment. Alpha readers are the first readers after the novel manuscript has finished its final chapter. The alpha reader can be yourself as a writer or someone else.

Game of thrones: The Adventure Ned Stark

daniel_vera

4.3

20 Chs

Liked by 12 people

Replies6

Sylar_in_7Lv10

I didn't understand anything except the fact that you gave a bad rating without having read anything.

1yr

R0BLv2

Good for you, you are not kidding

1yr

GLYCOSIDESLv4

what does that even mean?

1yr

KDAfrostLv14

1yr

XenonNobleLv13

You high man? You make no sense

1yr

covestarLv14

Honestly I agree but I’ve read a bit of it to come to a conclusion but u on the other hand didn’t even read the novel to come to that conclusion.. u seem like a hater or a bot..

11mth

Other Reviews

GLYCOSIDESLv4

Cool story, I expected Ned to be dilly-dallying around everywhere, but no, it's quite a serious-casual fic. Serious being the plot, casual being the story. Nothing blunderous aside from some minor punctuation mistakes, so a 5 star from me.

1yr

ValadonchikLv2

The idea is not bad. but poorly executed. It looks very much like a draft......................................................................................................................................................................................

1yr

DaoistzuVmuaLv1

Honestly the story is not bad but everything is resolved simply by the power of friendship. and author don't know why some parts are lost, for example when ned strangles the guard it doesn't come out, ned just says "I don't like threats to my family" out of nowhere "ned is vomiting" I don't know if you don't like putting those parts in or When uploading the file to webnovel they are lost or deleted.

11mth

1velLv4

Reveal spoiler

11mth

QuaziYLv4

Good story. I hope you update more and complete it.

11mth

Rebekah_WilleyLv3

Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯

11mth

Jesus_Lopez_3189Lv1

Es una novela con bastante futuro sino se abandona hay q pulir algunos detalles como la falta de crueldad del mc y su deseo de permanecer demasiado discreto

11mth

daniel_moreno_6105Lv12

Le voy a dar la oportunidad por qué hasta donde va la historia tiene tiempo de arreglar errores en la actitud del MC como su falta de crueldad y no querer destacar como se debe y dar demasiada buena voluntad a vasallos que ni siquiera son suyos y me parece que está empezando a parecer un bufón demasiado alegre para mí gusto pero tiene tiempo de arreglarlo pero hasta ahora me ha gustado la historia

1yr

LontraDiabeticaLv5

I strongly believe that if this Fic receives help from an editor, it has the possibility of being one of the biggest and best GOT Fic, it just needs polishing to remove some confusing things and fill in some empty places that are abruptly skipped, other than that, I recommend you read the Fic, you won't regret it.

1yr

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