Gunts92

I was sure of it, pff

I have nowhere to say it via the patreon so I'm saying it here for chapter 91, it's annoying that he's trying to make Tyson cry, because that's really what it looks like

Comme toujours tu abandonne tes bonne histoires pour des histoires fan service pleine de s.e...

J'apprécie (I appreciate)

why so much mystery, just put the link in the description, that's what is done when we are grateful to the original author. and that the interested parties are not there to take your cabbage every time

the introduction is ridiculous, obviously he doesn't have an airbender when he arrives since he is a waterbender...

you don't lack nerve, to make a disclaimer on the fact that the story belongs to its author, while you yourself steal someone's story to publish it here. and you don't even name the author of the mtl.

Rarement vu une fanfiction aussi cool, ya des truc qui ne vont pas mais ce ne sont que des details. J'e ne sais pas si c'est un mtl, mais si c'est le cas c'est bien essoré des truc de suprematie. les monde choisi sont bien traité pour que même des gens qui ne connaisse pas n'est pas de mal.

so cool, aron fight wanda, good fight

the synopsis seems to me to be made with an AI, the targariens are quoted too much, they are not a problem for the boy until he is an adult "normally" if it is a story written with AI I would probably put one star.