Item: I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
Rating: 3
Author: XP_HAVOK

XP_HAVOKLv43mth

2024-08-27 00:04

this novel isn't bad except 2 glaring issues. 1 every female character is weak willed woman who after he helps them immediately becomes a blushing mess that has fallen in love with him. the 2nd my biggest thing I don't like with the character having the mind of a 40 year old man has seduced mostly minors like 90% minors the youngest being probably 7 and while he says he likes older characters every single chance he has gotten he turns them down but doesn't to the minor characters and even flirts with them with each having nearly the same personality.

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

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