So I've been following this author for a while, he has decent writing skills. it's actually enjoyable to read his work. Unfortunately most of the time the mc turns into a Gary sue who does no wrong. A basic example is anytime there is a Jedi or a person who disagrees with the main characters viewpoint they won't even really be named, they'll just be bunched up like NPCs when mentioned. Things will always work out for the main character, the MC will boldly state something that isn't socially normal. Like he will be against other characters believes, like the Jedi. he will challenge said believes and they just.. take it? Even when the main character is in the right, that's it? In real life it's more complicated. But in here if someone gets actually upset it's usually just a background character that isn't even named and if they are named they just get face slapped. Its not a bad fanfic but everything is extremely convenient.
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If you have read author's MCU spider you'll understand how his fics works💀
Who's to say I haven't? I for sure have. But reading this one made me realize that bro did not improve at all after 600+ chapters on the spiderman one.
Worst thing is that he writes with the same quality as chinese tl fics.
