Chapter 80 marks the downfall of the novel for me... He goes to earth, somehow manages to sense natasha's plea for help from miles away, comes across guards that are righfully doing their job to apprehend an assassin(natasha) who killed their employer and then MC kills them, thats a sith tendency not a jedi or even so called grey jedi characteristics... This chapter was such a mindless forced plot by the author that am speechless, In the battle against hutts, he killed 100s of troops from hutt side which was made up of slave capturing troops, killing them was the work of a grey jedi... But in natasha's case, he killed the guards just because he could and took the side that was legally, morally and otherwise in any matter wrong, he would have not done that according to what MCs character setting had been emphasized till chapter 80, atleast he would have tried to use force to let the guards drop the issue and back off... I just lost interest reading anymore after that, MCs character break and forced plot of meeting Natasha, first time coming to earth broke any immersion into the novel and the logic flow that the novel was following before this... Right now the novel and its plot is obsolete to me, so dropping this novel at chapter 80. P.S.- Prior to chqpter 80, this novel was one of the best fanfic related to star wars and MCU, after chapter 80, it became just one of the many novels out there, just Meh!
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I also stopped reading the novel after this chapter. I expected a lot from his first landing on the ground, but not this.
bro... you okey? I mean mentally are you okey?
The bro making crying jokes that suspiciously sound like his own crying. It's like, if the buddy was offended because someone criticized his favorite ff, just say it, champ.
That was 8 months ago. * shrug *
