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Gamerz_Sal
Gamerz_SalLv210mth
2024-07-12 16:07

Chapter 80 marks the downfall of the novel for me... He goes to earth, somehow manages to sense natasha's plea for help from miles away, comes across guards that are righfully doing their job to apprehend an assassin(natasha) who killed their employer and then MC kills them, thats a sith tendency not a jedi or even so called grey jedi characteristics... This chapter was such a mindless forced plot by the author that am speechless, In the battle against hutts, he killed 100s of troops from hutt side which was made up of slave capturing troops, killing them was the work of a grey jedi... But in natasha's case, he killed the guards just because he could and took the side that was legally, morally and otherwise in any matter wrong, he would have not done that according to what MCs character setting had been emphasized till chapter 80, atleast he would have tried to use force to let the guards drop the issue and back off... I just lost interest reading anymore after that, MCs character break and forced plot of meeting Natasha, first time coming to earth broke any immersion into the novel and the logic flow that the novel was following before this... Right now the novel and its plot is obsolete to me, so dropping this novel at chapter 80. P.S.- Prior to chqpter 80, this novel was one of the best fanfic related to star wars and MCU, after chapter 80, it became just one of the many novels out there, just Meh!

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Goblin_1000
Goblin_1000Lv4

I also stopped reading the novel after this chapter. I expected a lot from his first landing on the ground, but not this.

IWant2DieALilMore
IWant2DieALilMoreLv14

Goblin_1000:I also stopped reading the novel after this chapter. I expected a lot from his first landing on the ground, but not this.
md_rizvi
md_rizviLv4

bro... you okey? I mean mentally are you okey?

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FairyCannon
FairyCannonLv2

The bro making crying jokes that suspiciously sound like his own crying. It's like, if the buddy was offended because someone criticized his favorite ff, just say it, champ.

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IWant2DieALilMore
IWant2DieALilMoreLv14

That was 8 months ago. * shrug *

FairyCannon:The bro making crying jokes that suspiciously sound like his own crying. It's like, if the buddy was offended because someone criticized his favorite ff, just say it, champ.
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Harem_police
Harem_policeLv14

read up to the most recent chapter, its worse still, there is transformers in this universe and he bonds with the ALLSPARK through the force, meets the hot girl from Transformers 1 and makes her and Natasha his girlfriends (even though he has Padme in space), they agree (for some reason?), Transformer girl is a mutant now?? and now he has 3 girlfriends and they all engage in combat at some parts even though only one of them is trained, one is a princess that just leaves her planet, and another is a regular fcking person, and also RONAN is back even though he DIED???

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