Another absolute banger from AlienWarlord.The authors ability to pace a story leaves every chapter feeling like another well placed facet in a grand gem.

So I've been following this author for a while, he has decent writing skills. it's actually enjoyable to read his work. Unfortunately most of the time the mc turns into a Gary sue who does no wrong. A basic example is anytime there is a Jedi or a person who disagrees with the main characters viewpoint they won't even really be named, they'll just be bunched up like NPCs when mentioned. Things will always work out for the main character, the MC will boldly state something that isn't socially normal. Like he will be against other characters believes, like the Jedi. he will challenge said believes and they just.. take it? Even when the main character is in the right, that's it? In real life it's more complicated. But in here if someone gets actually upset it's usually just a background character that isn't even named and if they are named they just get face slapped. Its not a bad fanfic but everything is extremely convenient.

Reveal spoiler

MC is a r*t*rded manchild with the battle IQ of a toddler. All good except for the character design and story development.

No idea how this story got such a high rating. It has the typical AI generated sentences that make it annoying to read over time. The MC is a joke (as of chapter 20) and has a weird split personality.

Honestly the story is pretty good but the mc makes me so mad its like nothing he does has any repercussions and everyone just goes along with what he says. Even when he does something wrong and he does get a “punishment” it’s always something that he mostly likes to do or something that is severely light for what he did. But overall liked everything else

it's a webnovel fanfict, things that make no sense happen for no other reason than plot. min maxed to be cringey. the mc is a psychopathic serial killer who looks for reasons to kill people even when there's no benefit or reason. kills thousands of innocents then rants about how evil ravagers/bandits are.

AUTHOR I Am a FAN OF YOUR WORK and LOVE YOUR SPIDERMAN NOVEL SO I WILL LOVE THIS TOO...but I hope you can make a mass-effect novel centered around Liara with this same plot story. thank you for your novel's awesome stories.

Plz let him have 2 girls, Since most of the reading about only 1 Female lead gets boring. So, ya let him have 2 girls. Also, I am fan of your spider-man novel, and have high hopes for this as well, good luck.