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her not his

depends on the safe for the cheaper ones yes. They are more for looks you can wedge something in the Crack hit it a few times with a hammer and open it. most locks as well aren't as strong as people would like a few good hits or 2 wrenches can break most locks sadly

you changed Raid's name in this chapter

this chaper has many words that are broken up by it makes it harder to read breaks the flow

harem will ruin it makes the story revolve around them and forced plot points or you make them 2 dimensional and the love feels fake one lover let's you paint a better picture makes a better story. people say they want harem but the story never goes big cause it impacts the storytelling to the point it becomes trash

he tripped not I tripped

growth would be decent for an average person it's basically the same serum walker got.

if you can use it on dark races it also works on humans devouring others for your gain just another form of cannibalism. although there is a chance it might work on devouring other things of great wave energy.

decent story problem is it immediately goes into a young master story he suffers basically no defeats and people are only used to fuel the plot a journey full of once in a lifetime coincidences and chances being made makes it lose it's appeal then the translation quality deteriorates insanely quick and in some later chapters you can see Asian language just randomly then genders get wrong and I'm pretty sure names as well and it doesn't help with people changing names back and forth constantly.

wonderful chapters ^-^