Dude, The MC here abuses and tortures civ ninjas just cause they verbally threatened him which to him this is supposed to be anything but harmful and with such a strong genjutsu that even a specialized jonin had to work a sweat to dispell.. Wtf? My luck today is very bad, one day, two naruto fanfic, one child killer MC(killed a kid to get his eye power and justified that the kid ranmaru was doing evil assisting raiga anyway) and now this child abuser MC... * sigh* Fk my luck!!! Guys anyone please suggest a naruto fanfic with a FU©KING normal protagonist at-the-fu*king-least has basic moral bottom line and doesnt get power corrupted

After last line gave it 2.2 stars, not that it would matter

Giving a 3 - star just cuz I cant accept MC killing a child just to get his eye power and trying come up with a reason to justify his act... Granted Naruto series is based on a shinobi world and its very dark as well, but there is a reason why people like naruto cuz the protag doesnt KILL period and likes to come up with sound reason and power to either subdue or reason with enemies, and similarly I would like to read a fanfic where protag atleast has a moral bottom line, whats the point of reading a naruto fanfic, if you are gonna do what other ninjas or any villain in naruto world would do to get stronger. I would have rather liked the MC with his bit of cheat like limitless potential making do with his limited resources to train and go after free opportunities in the world or of his direct enemies rather than killing people unprovoked even though they are bad people and child in this case(i.e. ranmaru), he is acting exactly like danzo and orochimaru would. KILL anyone if it means powering yourself up and dont give a fuck since being powerful and all you can help others and do more good in the future and do greater good... Wait... No Orochimaru and Danzo though hateful are atleast straight enough to acknowledge the killing for there own selfish agenda, here the MC is literally acting like a hypocrite would. (Killing for own selfish agenda but acting like he is powering himself for future to do greater good) FUCK that is really a hypocrite now that I summarize MCs mindset

There is a reason why naruto is best selling and best accepted by everyone like one piece, both the protagonist are kind hearted and dont kill casually even with the need to... This bites them back, but the protags are strong enough to "defeat them again if they defeated them once" But then again this novel is realistic atleast as realistic as logic goes in naruto without having protag aura... A guy gotta do whatever to survive especially knowing how fragile life in the future is... Still this novel is not my cup of tea, call me a hypocrite but I just cant accept protags that kill children for WHATEVER reason they make up... but the fanfic was interesting and entertaining till this point... Good luck on this project author.

The conept of master taking in disciples and getting rewards for nurturing them through the system is old yet entertaining concept... This novel is same but concept execution is lacking in this novel... - Lots of pointless boring chapters, - Author fails in using humor and comedy in this novel, There are humors and misunderstandings that are supposedly used to bring a smile to your face or make you burst out of laughter cuz of the characters sillyness and other wise, but i literally didnt smile even once while reading the chapters, only felt that the chapters were boring instead... , - The MC is literally good for nothing except for his cultivation talent, he creates shoddy stuffs and somehow feels proud about them (is that guy seriously an earthling to not even have the very very basic of self awareness of his own abilities?) - His disciples seem 2D as well, their characters mathed with dialogues seems forced or uncoordinated... - All characters in this novel seem and act like brainless idiots.. I dont have any other material to read atm but even then I cant bring myself to read another chapter in this novel... 😣

REVIEW BASED UPTO CHAPTER 40+ -> I like the plant based concept and the various magical traits they posses but thats about everything good I have to say about this novel... Everything else is not really to my taste... But objectively speaking, - There is no world building as of chapter 40+, just a plant based sect based on somewhere, nothing else about the world yet and will probably continue to be so for many chapters to come. (Acceptable) - The Main character is SUPER unnecesarily overly cautious, like ANY action from ANYONE is overly scrutinized by him for possible conspiracy EVERY SINGLE TIME. If I have to put the feeling i got from the novel till now, then as a whole the MC is like - "I can't take a dump here, what if people suspect me as a spy/body possesor from the location and color of my dump?! They will erase me!! No, I gotta be cautious, better not to take dump now"(over exaggerating it but you get my point right?) - Not to mention author also actively makes up stuff suggesting everyone is really plotting or in the process of making a plot against him. How utterly ridiculous! Like higher ups have nothing better to do and have a lot of time to waste on a weak trash like MC rather than cultivating/researching/doing whatever. - Last but not least, the system is very vaguely stated, until now I only got that it gives point for successfully maturing a plant/tree and you can use that point to advance the grade of trait that the said plant possesses, but the basic logic of how many points you get from what and all is not defined including many other things... Overall, This novel's appeal to me is very low atm, and I am frustrated by it cuz I very much liked the concept, so this long ass review... Let me know if this novel gets better or not, cuz I cant stand his annoying super over cautious nature... Its a waste of chapter length and word count.

Yeah thanks buddy, will skip this novel then... I hate this kinda novel where MC acts like an useless atm to his so called "comrades" at the cost of his own improvement and when a loved one gets hurt, they blame heavens and shit... Lol

*taking revenge

Barely Useful to pass time... Nonsensical plot and trash use of coincidences and plot armors, like in in chapter 55, how he just happened to enter heaven city or whatever and for some horse shit reason, a very powerful imperial dao fruit or whatever was being auctioned at what you can call a "newbie zone", if thats not nonsense than what is? and for whatever reason he put himself in spotlight for no reason at all by trying payback 1000 times for something he owed or whatever... Only CN idiotic authors can come up with this kind of nonsense Good potential but personally i find it disgusting when MCs put themselves in grand spotlight for nonsnsical reason like paying back favor or taking reasons only to wait for plot armors to save there sorry pathetic axxes

This is an interesting novel but the entire novel is very visibly dependent on plot armors and metric f**k ton amout at that... Wouldhave been better if you could give him powers prior so he could recover and or counter attack without always depending on plot armor.... You are so keen on using plot armor but want to keep it real when it comes to him savaging items from his golden finger/system? Be less hypocritical, author yeah? Anyway except for these part, the story itself is interesting, i will give you that

Author said that 140-150 chaps will be like this... And at this moment i cant bring myself to read this novel, maybe some other day when am bored , I may read other works of the author

All these done by an 11 yr old? 18 or more would have been better, the age and his actions are not compatible... Just imagine your 11 yr old kid playing like a normal child, then one day he goes to sleep and the next day he wakes up and says he wants to make a movie and has the script and drawings and everything, some days later he says he has music scores for the movie as well?? Super not making any sense and unbelievable, people might as well think that he is possessed or something... Saw many comments saying dont bring logic to fan fiction, but i disagree... Everything has logic whether you like it or not, fantasy or otherwise or else anyone can write a logicless fanfiction of chapter 1- Earthling transmigrated to Harry potter world, chapter 2- Defeated Voldermort (no logic fanfiction ri8?) chapter 3- The End... I dont think anyone would even bother commenting on such a stupid logicless Harry potter fanfic. Dont you think?

Its good enough for time pass but other than that even on the logic basis (fantasy or any other logic included), this novel is not that good, women or MCs harem are 2d and act brainlessly and are cringey to say the least... MC is a rapist who puts the blame on super soldier serum side effects and author makes those raped women act like they cant live without him... And MC is also very arrogant without backing of proper individual or organizational power... Author makes MC do bad things but gaslights it as MC doing a favor on others.... Overall if you get bored of the novel like me, there are metric fu*k tons of bad points of this novel but then again from first chapter onwards author also doesnt hide his/her wish fullfillment in this novel Byt bottomline is i am bored of this novel and for above mentioned points - 3/5 stars

Super unreliable author... One chapter says he became god and then next chapter says he has yet to become a god One chapter has one set of number related to his faith points creation and what not but in the next chapter the numbers are changed. For eg - In one chapter, MC says he got 200 galaxy origin point but in the next chapter author changes it to 20 galaxy origin points for no reason. There is no description or explanation on what kind of system MC has, what are its capabilities, limitations and other stuffs... MC doesnt utilize his powers properly, 98% of his divine domain is empty which he could buy and fill with devout believers and in return get large amount of faith points everyday from them which acts like a currency... The divine domain concept and what goes in it is super vague and almost non existant... There are many more abnormalities, in addition after chapter 100, this novel becomes unreadable as previous chapter ending and preset chapter beginning are different and unlinked and feels like missing context... Overall I would not recommend reading this novel and if you want a time pass then read until chapter 80 and drop it, not worthwhile to waste brain cells and time on waste chapters after that... Again this is a shit typical chinese novel

This is clearly a wish fulfillment novel with cliche and logicless element... Super OP MC... Fine, too much OP compared to others but still... Fine. but whats up with a crevice opening in his house and his cheap rental house being fine, when monster mages are firing fireballs and icicle arrows and 6-7 heavy duty monsters are fighting recklessly with weapons? Are you saying the house is fine even with all this and there are no neighbours complaining or inquiring about the noise? WTF? How can you leave such an obvious logic hole for no reason?? Moreover maybe because MC is too OP or whatever, this novel from the beginning itself looses much value and interesting charisma for me not to mention the typical chinese xianxia moves as skills like golden bell and indestructible body nonsense makes it too much for me to read this, atleast come up with good enough skill names and dont just copy paste the ages old used in million novel moves... Well I cant continue reading this but if you can ignore the above mentioned reasons, you may be able to read this novel and for many may even be good read... Too bad this is not my cup of tea

Managed to read until chapter 721, couldnt go pass it after one of MC's sub base got destroyed and he had no reaction to it... One sec he is angry for all deaths caused in his sub base, next moment he is craftily trying to recruit another blacksmith... Author always writes in a way like when a mistake is made, its never MCs fault, rathereveryone comes to him and says like - you did good and it was not in your hands... MC doesnt take things seriously and is extremely apathetic to situations... His mentality is like oh that enemy harmed my forces, kill him... Oh he ran away then forget it, letsmove on to our next agenda... An enemy force has been encroaching on them but even if he knows it, he acts like whatever am busy with other things, too lazy to pursue them, let others handle it and consequence? One of his own orgs base stations got done in... I hate these kinda novels with irresponsible MCs

Its readable and is okay for passing time but personally i think this novel is not that good... No goals for MC, he is just developing his planet without any goal of whats the use of developing planet, what powers does it give you? The planet development is just a trash replication of nonsense great xia kingdom and almost similar to what earth has gone through... Many things are different in MCs nurtured world and with his nonsense no manipulation and free reign given for natural evolution of planet, somehow the world and its people follow the route of ancient china, from name to special event like 3 kingdom and everything... There are only minor differences and add-ons These things are still fine but sheer audacity of the author to waste readers time with overly filler chapters filled with unimportant mob talks are disgusting.. Like MCs gives and exam and 10 minutes later this exams result would be shown to public but somehow author thought its good thing to strech these 10 mins unimaginably to 15-25 chapters filled with some no name so called geniuses' flattery, fake humility and flattery filled speculation and bootlicking nonsense... From these i knew that the competion will be stretched for 150-200 chapters unreasonably by the author for no fucking good reason... I am done with this trash novel, i hate it when author waste time unreasonably with trash talks and mob discussions which has no utter short or long term benefit or relation to the novel's plot and then repeating this type of narrative again and again... Atlast interesting concept but read at your own risk but I for one am super frustrated by this novel

This is an ALMOST copy of canon events... MCs entry with rick from the very beginning would have logically created a super storm from very beginning itself if you go by the butterfly effect... But here MC is just a non-biting mindless zombie following rick, minimal dialogues between MC and rick, minimal productive input for ideas by MC in case of some canonical events, most of the actions are executed by rick and again MC just follows along dumbly... Nevermind... Am dropping this after chapter 10, no motivation to further read what i have already watched in a better version of this

Lol you dont get free stuffs and call that a shop... Its not a shop then, its just your inventory...

Rick does all the actions original to canon with no difference except for a living breathing human beside him, 1 year in soltitude for MC where he only trained and 1st time seeing Rick,the main character(probably why he choose the walking dead world) and except for one or two sentence dialogue, there is nothing else? Whats up with completely ignoring the butterfly effect of MCs sheer existence and MC being showcased as cheap emotionless pixel character? No pixel characters atleast show emojis... Not liking how this story is being written with only some modification to canon series... But its only in initial phase, so will continue