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Ryan_9182
Ryan_9182Lv122mth
2024-10-16 17:47

I absolutely loved this book one of the best I’ve read for a very long time however I do have some problems Mainly Mira I think you dedicate too much time to her making multiple chapters about her in a row I think she Is a good character just not worth having as much time in put too her and the other problem I have is that we didn’t delve more into the fact that he can steal talents like when he stole the fire talent I was expecting to see what else he would steal like maybe the pierce from the red demon would have been interesting but other than those I thought the book was amazing keep up the good work

Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!

TheUngod
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510 Chs

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Sravan_Patri
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Mira is the FL right

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my best book , really i love this book, i think you can give one chance , dont be hesitate, will be a rising star over time [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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the author took huge inspiration from "Shadow Slave" and then made it entirely their own... This story is awesome, worth reading and adding to your library!

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bro NGL i haven't read the novel but the cover is sick man

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Beluinus
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I was tremendously enjoying the story and looking forward to how far the MC can go. But I just couldn't anymore. The world building was decent, with showing that both worlds are different enough and have different societies. It's basically a cut and paste of the beginning of and rough semantics of Shadow Slave, something the autor himself admitted. But the MC is just stupid. Repeatedly. Constantly forgets abilities he has, and has so many Ex Machinas to save his life in fights he should have no business participating in. Then you're constantly slapped in the face, over and over, about how special MC is. Like how much stronger for his level he is, and how much potential he has compared to others.

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New_6151
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Its good. Felt a little like shadow slave but thats not a bad thing. The pacing is great to.

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sergioh1t
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[Alert Spoiler - Cap 121] Does the MC have a hero complex, or is he just stupid? This cave arc is really annoying me—I was really enjoying this story, but now I'm not sure if I should continue. I'll probably read a few more chapters, though... Why is the MC going to fight someone he knows almost nothing about, who has a high chance of killing him? To save people in a world he knows very little about? It's worth noting that he can already return to his own universe—he's completed his objective. He could even just go train somewhere else if he doesn't want to go back yet... But no, he prefers to risk his life constantly and in every possible way.

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GreyH
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A pretty good and interesting story , the fights are not dragged too much which is what I like. The characters are fleshed out and have different personalities , the bad guys or the villains are not dumb they have their own schemes and stuff. The mc is a teenager who was not exposed to the outer world so he is a little naive but certainly not dumb and he adapts very quickly so him being dumb won't be a problem . Overall a pretty interesting story and good easy to read writing make it a must read if you like these types of story. Pretty excited to see where this story will go. SPOILER AHEAD !!! Message for Author - Keep going Author your work is certainly a top tier , Also I like the way how Alex and Mira relationship is going . I would certainly like to see their relation grow more . And maybe how they fight together in duo .

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