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GreyH
GreyHLv48mth
2024-06-04 00:13

A pretty good and interesting story , the fights are not dragged too much which is what I like. The characters are fleshed out and have different personalities , the bad guys or the villains are not dumb they have their own schemes and stuff. The mc is a teenager who was not exposed to the outer world so he is a little naive but certainly not dumb and he adapts very quickly so him being dumb won't be a problem . Overall a pretty interesting story and good easy to read writing make it a must read if you like these types of story. Pretty excited to see where this story will go. SPOILER AHEAD !!! Message for Author - Keep going Author your work is certainly a top tier , Also I like the way how Alex and Mira relationship is going . I would certainly like to see their relation grow more . And maybe how they fight together in duo .

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DaoistCkdsB0
DaoistCkdsB0Lv4

did we read the same story?

GreyH
GreyHLv4

someone skipped chapters i see

DaoistCkdsB0:did we read the same story?
Kaiser_Evil
Kaiser_EvilLv13

Seriously I'm curious why all authors need to start a story with a protagonist that has the same background every time, this is a little boring to have the same starting point each time. Can't it be some normal dude that found something related to fundamental Truth that will change his life forever and depict his journey to discover more about the world and beyond?

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