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GreyH
GreyHLv46mth
2024-06-04 00:13

A pretty good and interesting story , the fights are not dragged too much which is what I like. The characters are fleshed out and have different personalities , the bad guys or the villains are not dumb they have their own schemes and stuff. The mc is a teenager who was not exposed to the outer world so he is a little naive but certainly not dumb and he adapts very quickly so him being dumb won't be a problem . Overall a pretty interesting story and good easy to read writing make it a must read if you like these types of story. Pretty excited to see where this story will go. SPOILER AHEAD !!! Message for Author - Keep going Author your work is certainly a top tier , Also I like the way how Alex and Mira relationship is going . I would certainly like to see their relation grow more . And maybe how they fight together in duo .

Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!

TheUngod
4.4
510 Chs

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DaoistCkdsB0
DaoistCkdsB0Lv4

did we read the same story?

5mth
GreyH
GreyHLv4

someone skipped chapters i see

DaoistCkdsB0:did we read the same story?
5mth
Kaiser_Evil
Kaiser_EvilLv13

Seriously I'm curious why all authors need to start a story with a protagonist that has the same background every time, this is a little boring to have the same starting point each time. Can't it be some normal dude that found something related to fundamental Truth that will change his life forever and depict his journey to discover more about the world and beyond?

5mth
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TheUngod
TheUngodAuthor

Reveal spoiler

8mth

Art_Show
Art_ShowLv10

my best book , really i love this book, i think you can give one chance , dont be hesitate, will be a rising star over time [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3mth
Zook_51
Zook_51Lv15

the author took huge inspiration from "Shadow Slave" and then made it entirely their own... This story is awesome, worth reading and adding to your library!

3mth
DeadpanDeme
DeadpanDemeLv4

Reveal spoiler

5mth
Fiaran
FiaranLv14

Reveal spoiler

6mth
Potato_Big
Potato_BigLv3

bro NGL i haven't read the novel but the cover is sick man

8mth
Beluinus
BeluinusLv15

I was tremendously enjoying the story and looking forward to how far the MC can go. But I just couldn't anymore. The world building was decent, with showing that both worlds are different enough and have different societies. It's basically a cut and paste of the beginning of and rough semantics of Shadow Slave, something the autor himself admitted. But the MC is just stupid. Repeatedly. Constantly forgets abilities he has, and has so many Ex Machinas to save his life in fights he should have no business participating in. Then you're constantly slapped in the face, over and over, about how special MC is. Like how much stronger for his level he is, and how much potential he has compared to others.

4mth
New_6151
New_6151Lv1

Its good. Felt a little like shadow slave but thats not a bad thing. The pacing is great to.

5mth
sergioh1t
sergioh1tLv13

[Alert Spoiler - Cap 121] Does the MC have a hero complex, or is he just stupid? This cave arc is really annoying me—I was really enjoying this story, but now I'm not sure if I should continue. I'll probably read a few more chapters, though... Why is the MC going to fight someone he knows almost nothing about, who has a high chance of killing him? To save people in a world he knows very little about? It's worth noting that he can already return to his own universe—he's completed his objective. He could even just go train somewhere else if he doesn't want to go back yet... But no, he prefers to risk his life constantly and in every possible way.

4mth
Darius_Chromwell
Darius_ChromwellLv4

Why does it feel like the main character is not actually the main character but rather the comedic relief… where can I go to read Mira’s side of the story if anyone is actually the main character then it’s her!

2mth
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