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TheUngod
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2024-04-02 18:28

Obligatory shameless author review! This is my second official book, and I am taking this one much more seriously than my last one as I made some bad mistakes with that one that unfortunately led to it being dropped. But I learned a lot from writing my previous book and I'm putting my all into this novel from this point onwards! Happy reading!

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Im_LaZy_007
Im_LaZy_007Lv13

bro, is this harem or Single female lead?🙏

TheUngod
TheUngodAuthor

Single fl

Im_LaZy_007:bro, is this harem or Single female lead?🙏
Im_LaZy_007
Im_LaZy_007Lv13

cool 👍

TheUngod:Single fl
IFuckedJadeBeauty
IFuckedJadeBeautyLv13

hello, is he op or slightly stronger than average mobs?

TheUngod
TheUngodAuthor

A bit of both

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daoistkitty
daoistkittyLv15

Did you take inspiration from another book? One that has the word slave in it? Cause outside of the setting and the background of the MC, it’s very similar. Was that on purpose or coincidence?

TheUngod
TheUngodAuthor

read the auxiliary chapter

daoistkitty:Did you take inspiration from another book? One that has the word slave in it? Cause outside of the setting and the background of the MC, it’s very similar. Was that on purpose or coincidence?
daoistkitty
daoistkittyLv15

Thank you for pointing that out. I just jumped into the book and the Aux chapter was skipped by the app so I didn’t see it. Thank you for clearing that up. Though I will say it’s really similar and feel like that meme “you can copy my homework, but don’t copy it word for word”. I think if the first chapter was shorter and focused on the character and/or setting more then the second chapter being the first chapter would have made things smoother, but that is hindsight at work

TheUngod:read the auxiliary chapter
Daoist_Of_Torment
Daoist_Of_TormentLv4

author does he get smarter or remains same

_Soy_Sauce_
_Soy_Sauce_Lv14

I read this as ‘single for life’ and my heart dropped😂😂😂

TheUngod:Single fl
wrongaccounttt
wrongaccountttLv14

Thank God, I would I hated to drop this if it was harem, I can't stand the harem genre.

TheUngod:Single fl
Elena_Hernandez_2928
Elena_Hernandez_2928Lv3

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DarknorthDao
DarknorthDaoLv15

Just one question. Does the mc conform to the dystopia or does he not.

yours_truly_reader
yours_truly_readerLv3

dumb forever

Daoist_Of_Torment:author does he get smarter or remains same
Reinjeloh_Arodner
Reinjeloh_ArodnerLv4

does this novel has a harem for the mc to have in the future ?

pb_jelly
pb_jellyLv15

he is stupid and just makes dumb choices. Definitely living up to be a teenager

IFuckedJadeBeauty:hello, is he op or slightly stronger than average mobs?
pb_jelly
pb_jellyLv15

does the story get better during the school arc? the cave arc ended horribly, the mc literally just left the enemies body and didn't even try to get anything from that fight. I'm tired of spending money on so many junk chapters. the cave arc ruined this for me.

OtakuRimuru
OtakuRimuruLv3

lol😂

_Soy_Sauce_:I read this as ‘single for life’ and my heart dropped😂😂😂
king_of_dragon
king_of_dragonLv3

i am happy if he is single or has a single wife but multiple just makes the story go bad with focus on cleaning their mess up and is just an all around nuisance

Azrael_Astaroth
Azrael_AstarothLv3

don't write Maria story it's boring

TheUngod:Single fl
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Sonto_Chukwu
Sonto_ChukwuLv15

Too All the Critc on this book, You all keep forgetting that the MC and FL are supposed to be 18 years who practically have no live experience or childhood to speak of, and you expect them to be some all-knowing, sagely and perfect MC but to me I think the author is not wrong the MC is supposed to flawed make mistakes contradict himself and learns as he goes he lived 17 years alone as a glorified slave and wondering when his next meal would come instead of actually being a child and then a teenager so obviously those traits would show up now it can be clearly seen that his actions his him try to over compensate all the things he missed. and as for him trusting Mira so soon again, like I said before, they are children with no experience to how relationship work no ever told them about proper communication and all that, your problem is that you were looking for some edgy kid who uses lies and deceit go through like which does not make sense because at the end of the day regardless of how much power they have the are still kids you are saying Mira is unlikable and all that nonsense because she spied on him but ask yourself what do you expect a child who knows practically nothing about normal relationships, talkless of romantic relationship to do she spied on him because the cared and as bad as spying it can be seen clearly as she did it because she didn't know better and thankfully she was properly educated that all the MC and FL needs proper adult guidance before they become to powerful to consider it for now regardless of all their power and talent they are still children and just children but teenagers with raging hormones and even worst they never got release those hormones all and are doing it at once now.

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