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my best book , really i love this book, i think you can give one chance , dont be hesitate, will be a rising star over time [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

the author took huge inspiration from "Shadow Slave" and then made it entirely their own... This story is awesome, worth reading and adding to your library!

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I was tremendously enjoying the story and looking forward to how far the MC can go. But I just couldn't anymore. The world building was decent, with showing that both worlds are different enough and have different societies. It's basically a cut and paste of the beginning of and rough semantics of Shadow Slave, something the autor himself admitted. But the MC is just stupid. Repeatedly. Constantly forgets abilities he has, and has so many Ex Machinas to save his life in fights he should have no business participating in. Then you're constantly slapped in the face, over and over, about how special MC is. Like how much stronger for his level he is, and how much potential he has compared to others.

Its good. Felt a little like shadow slave but thats not a bad thing. The pacing is great to.

[Alert Spoiler - Cap 121] Does the MC have a hero complex, or is he just stupid? This cave arc is really annoying me—I was really enjoying this story, but now I'm not sure if I should continue. I'll probably read a few more chapters, though... Why is the MC going to fight someone he knows almost nothing about, who has a high chance of killing him? To save people in a world he knows very little about? It's worth noting that he can already return to his own universe—he's completed his objective. He could even just go train somewhere else if he doesn't want to go back yet... But no, he prefers to risk his life constantly and in every possible way.

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Too All the Critc on this book, You all keep forgetting that the MC and FL are supposed to be 18 years who practically have no live experience or childhood to speak of, and you expect them to be some all-knowing, sagely and perfect MC but to me I think the author is not wrong the MC is supposed to flawed make mistakes contradict himself and learns as he goes he lived 17 years alone as a glorified slave and wondering when his next meal would come instead of actually being a child and then a teenager so obviously those traits would show up now it can be clearly seen that his actions his him try to over compensate all the things he missed. and as for him trusting Mira so soon again, like I said before, they are children with no experience to how relationship work no ever told them about proper communication and all that, your problem is that you were looking for some edgy kid who uses lies and deceit go through like which does not make sense because at the end of the day regardless of how much power they have the are still kids you are saying Mira is unlikable and all that nonsense because she spied on him but ask yourself what do you expect a child who knows practically nothing about normal relationships, talkless of romantic relationship to do she spied on him because the cared and as bad as spying it can be seen clearly as she did it because she didn't know better and thankfully she was properly educated that all the MC and FL needs proper adult guidance before they become to powerful to consider it for now regardless of all their power and talent they are still children and just children but teenagers with raging hormones and even worst they never got release those hormones all and are doing it at once now.