Ok, so, several points! It's similar to shadow slave , that's a positive thing, unfortunately it didn't got me because the writing has some inconsistencies. 1) It lacks context and environmental description. The fight in the forest, what forest, what treas for example? How a boy that always lived in a asteroid ( mining) knows what a forest or treas are if he doesn't even know what horses are? 2) He has a fight with a wild carnivorous 1meter tall rabbit. The rabbit slices and wounds his leg. He defeats the rabbit. And then proceeds to run for 20km???? With a wounded leg??? 20km??? 3) He was in a camp with 1000 people, was the only survivor of a monster attack. Later he defeats the rabbit there. He skins the rabbit ( in like 10min?) and makes a bag with his skin. Lol ( without waiting to dry the blood? To do a bag like this you need to dry the skiing for days), and in the middle of thousands of death people he couldn't find a bag? No one had a bag? Incongruity like this gets me out of the reading completely. And it continues on and on.
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