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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt1h
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    This lady is demented, I really don't like her character.

    "That's rude. I think of myself as a beautiful lady. Who wouldn't want this?", she said as she pointed at her face filled with confidence.
    My Clinic In Another World
    Fantasy · Hoku_1
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt3h
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    How's is he sure that he would like his medical technique more if he hasn't even tried the other ones yet?

    "Yosh, I'll make my follower publicize for the clinic tonight," said Han cheering himself up as he decided on his goal. "I wonder what the 2 places would be like after all they are the medical providers of this world. I bet they would be awesome using all kinds of different techniques, but…I still like my techniques better", he said, chuckling.
    My Clinic In Another World
    Fantasy · Hoku_1
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt1d
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    Nothing can stop me from adding a story that has the tag 'No Harem', absolutely nothing💅, anyway, the story is off to a great start, I hope it keeps it up.

    The Extra Wants Control
    Fantasy · Kas73_
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt1d
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    Nadia is definitely my favorite character at this moment

    Ch 105 Nadia's anger! Bella's unwillingness
    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt1d
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    it seems like all the strong people in this world are women, Oliver have only ever really interacted with strong women.

    She was the main protagonist who had yet to achieve considerable strength. There was no way he was going to miss this opportunity.
    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt2d
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    It doesn't really feel like the Baron has a golden finger, because, the so called special treatment he gets from the system feels lacking, even the rewards are just so, so. It just feels like his only purpose was to load/start this gaming dungeon system, he has little to no control over the system, he can't even punish his citizens using it if they were to betray him, also he actually have to fight against his citizens in events inother to win prices? He is more like a clown than a noble, with what the system makes him do, how can his people ever respect him? it would have been better if he got some percentage from the rewards his citizens get in the dungeon, and the rate of his own growth is twice that of the others, thats what a golden finger should be like, also, the Author should perhaps study more about nobility before they proceed with the story.

    Ch 91 Beggar's resolution
    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt2d
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    Is Wallace really a noble and not a commoner? Even knights are shown more respect by the people than he is?😩 With how he is being treated, he isn't giving off a noble air at all.

    [ Townspeople 1: Booo! Stingy Baron!
    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt2d
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    This doesn't make much sense, but whatever I guess.

    [ You can't take back the Magic Crystals. Once they're in Baron or the host's account, you can't receive them again once you've spent them outside.
    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt2d
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    What kind of golden finger doesn't even inform it's owner about something so simple before doing it? I mean, shouldn't it give Wallace the chance to spearhead these events so as to further bolster his citizens loyalty to him, it feels like the golden finger likes making Wallace look stupid or confused.

    Did the 'golden finger' or 'cheat' hired her?
    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt2d
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    Brain dead citizens, I mean, M.C is a noble, so whether they accept him or not wouldn't matter much, they should have just accepted his generosity even if it was at face value, & only air such opinions when he isn't present, afterall, showing contempt against a noble should be a serious crime for commoners.

    "Wait, perhaps those are just rumors meant to present him favorably to us, so we would be willing to accept him?"
    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt2d
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    Exactly what I have been waiting for, finally, ordinary people can change their fates too.

    Soon, when it materialized, they all couldn't help but gasp.
    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt2d
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    I think the story will be even better if not just specific people could watch the Live stream of those in the dungeon but everyone who wants to, maybe a system store that sells bracelets for ordinary people or visiting guests of the territory, also said people could follow their favorite players, & even send gifts to them, of course it won't make much sense if the Baron doesn't have the largest followers, also, it did be good if the M.C can carry his butler in the game, a situation where ordinary people could gain the power of becoming knights or magic users once they clear certain missions in the dungeon, anyway, the story is still young so maybe the Author have plans for all this down the line.

    Outside the gaming cave, the Mana Knight Rederic, Alistair, Cedric, Eldric, Gideon, Ivander, Jasper, and Mage Marcus stood in a row that stretched into the distance.
    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt2d
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    The story is relatively good, but the characters are overly dramatic/emotional, they are characters that get scared easily for no good reason, overthink everything, cry for an unnecessary long period of time, & the worst was the M.C feeling sad for something as stupid as killing a dungeon monster. Everything else aside, as someone who transmigrated from earth, he is very aware of the fact that this is a game, moreover, there are monsters, so why the hell will he feel sad about killing them?😩 This story would have been really great if it was not poorly executed, but, despite its flaws, the story feels fresh & will keep you hooked.

    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt2d
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    There shouldn't be sadness in his eyes at all...😩

    Wallace stood over it, a mix of triumph and sadness in his eyes. He had achieved his goal, leveling up and becoming stronger, but at the cost of another creature's life.
    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt2d
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    The characters in this story are sometimes too emotional😩.

    "Listen, little girl, I know I can't understand, and I don't want to understand the pain that's consuming you. You know why? Because I'm an illegitimate child, condemned to a life of eternal darkness. I've never felt the warmth of the sun. All I've known is the confinement of books. Yet, I don't shed tears. You know why? Because there are others who suffer even more than I do, than you do, than all of us. So, stop your constant whining and tell me everything. Tell me, so I can still save this town, if there's a chance."
    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt2d
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    I got bored reading about her misery so I kept it...

    She cried harder, gasping for breath.
    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt4d
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    Yet another stupid antagonist appears😩

    Kevin's eyes narrowed, his next words oozing with killing intent. "Hmm, I'll send some mercenaries to slaughter his family. That should annoy this peasant a little, don't you think?"
    Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe
    Fantasy · Esenel
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt4d
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    Make this make sense, I know this isn't nonfiction, but still why will anyone in their right mind allow their enemy to live just so that their son can marry them? Are they no other women in the world except that one? I really hate it when authors do this. With such a huge grudge btw them, you can never tell when that enemy strikes back even if you have something to leverage against them, you can never tell when they will snap, so this types of scenarios never makes sense to me at all.

    That night her whole family would have been slaughtered had it not been for her accepting the sudden marriage proposal to the heir of the Gracie Family, Kevin Gracie. The two were to marry each other when they were of age.
    Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe
    Fantasy · Esenel
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt4d
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    Thank God

    As he teetered on the brink of unconsciousness, he heard the woman utter, "I'll come see you again, so get ready, young ancestor. And I'll ensure that your pain exceeds even that of your family. After all, since it's your destiny to resemble that man, your soul should endure years upon years of excruciating agony as payment for what he did to me."
    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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  • wrongaccounttt
    wrongaccounttt6d
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    My thoughts exactly, he better exact his own revenge when he grows stronger.

    "Why is this woman so relentless in her pursuit to torment me? What have I done to deserve her constant attacks?" Wallace pondered, his voice tinged with frustration. "It's completely unfair! I am not accountable for the errors of my ancestors!"
    Gaming Empire System
    Games · Notorious_911
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