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This lady is demented, I really don't like her character.
How's is he sure that he would like his medical technique more if he hasn't even tried the other ones yet?
it seems like all the strong people in this world are women, Oliver have only ever really interacted with strong women.
It doesn't really feel like the Baron has a golden finger, because, the so called special treatment he gets from the system feels lacking, even the rewards are just so, so. It just feels like his only purpose was to load/start this gaming dungeon system, he has little to no control over the system, he can't even punish his citizens using it if they were to betray him, also he actually have to fight against his citizens in events inother to win prices? He is more like a clown than a noble, with what the system makes him do, how can his people ever respect him? it would have been better if he got some percentage from the rewards his citizens get in the dungeon, and the rate of his own growth is twice that of the others, thats what a golden finger should be like, also, the Author should perhaps study more about nobility before they proceed with the story.
Is Wallace really a noble and not a commoner? Even knights are shown more respect by the people than he is?😩 With how he is being treated, he isn't giving off a noble air at all.
This doesn't make much sense, but whatever I guess.
What kind of golden finger doesn't even inform it's owner about something so simple before doing it? I mean, shouldn't it give Wallace the chance to spearhead these events so as to further bolster his citizens loyalty to him, it feels like the golden finger likes making Wallace look stupid or confused.
Brain dead citizens, I mean, M.C is a noble, so whether they accept him or not wouldn't matter much, they should have just accepted his generosity even if it was at face value, & only air such opinions when he isn't present, afterall, showing contempt against a noble should be a serious crime for commoners.
Exactly what I have been waiting for, finally, ordinary people can change their fates too.
I think the story will be even better if not just specific people could watch the Live stream of those in the dungeon but everyone who wants to, maybe a system store that sells bracelets for ordinary people or visiting guests of the territory, also said people could follow their favorite players, & even send gifts to them, of course it won't make much sense if the Baron doesn't have the largest followers, also, it did be good if the M.C can carry his butler in the game, a situation where ordinary people could gain the power of becoming knights or magic users once they clear certain missions in the dungeon, anyway, the story is still young so maybe the Author have plans for all this down the line.
The story is relatively good, but the characters are overly dramatic/emotional, they are characters that get scared easily for no good reason, overthink everything, cry for an unnecessary long period of time, & the worst was the M.C feeling sad for something as stupid as killing a dungeon monster. Everything else aside, as someone who transmigrated from earth, he is very aware of the fact that this is a game, moreover, there are monsters, so why the hell will he feel sad about killing them?😩 This story would have been really great if it was not poorly executed, but, despite its flaws, the story feels fresh & will keep you hooked.
There shouldn't be sadness in his eyes at all...😩
The characters in this story are sometimes too emotional😩.
I got bored reading about her misery so I kept it...
Yet another stupid antagonist appears😩
Make this make sense, I know this isn't nonfiction, but still why will anyone in their right mind allow their enemy to live just so that their son can marry them? Are they no other women in the world except that one? I really hate it when authors do this. With such a huge grudge btw them, you can never tell when that enemy strikes back even if you have something to leverage against them, you can never tell when they will snap, so this types of scenarios never makes sense to me at all.
Thank God
My thoughts exactly, he better exact his own revenge when he grows stronger.