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what the heck is this can't even understand a single chapter

why is there no update, this was a fantastic read

This is so dumb. Except system manipulating Cersi there is no way for mc to make it out alive

very silly missions and very big rewards

This had a very good and convincing plot and the story was moving smoothly even though I didn't like how author introduced mc as a scardy cat still it was memorable to read but then author starts making mc more and more pathetic mc doesn't have physical relationship even though he is a popular and a teen american student which is not convincing he acts like a gay who only loves books, mc doesn't have proper strength or courage ( he has courage only when it's required by system like that time with Leonard) I liked your concept of not overpowering mc but atleast don't make him pathetic make he average

This started to feel pathetic. mainly the MC is gay and loves books and Machines and second mc is weak ass i mean weak willed too just pathetic

How the fu*k is sheldon the copper accepting everything Mc tells it's not in his character. Here sheldon is not a friend of Mc so there isn't a reason why sheldon should be so accepting. This fanfiction is soo dumb 😭

Once again 😅

Again this sh*t

Fu*k it's becoming annoying