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Zo_The_Narcissist
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2024-03-18 07:35

It's one of the best novels I've read, and even though it has 25 chapters, the grammar is excellent and flawless. The world building isn't as developed as it could be—we only see him in a forest and close to a school—but the story flows well and I like that there is a limit to his strength—if he could get stronger quickly, the plot would become very predictable. The pace is also nice—it's neither too fast nor too slow to take a long time to complete tasks. All things considered, it's a good read.

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I intended to add that while the world building is not complete yet, it is sufficient for 25 chapters.

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