CoughBlood

I’ll finish it tho it won’t be a super long work. Will be starting release in a couple days

This story is actually pretty readable. Here, if I were to analyze for you, the main character’s flaw is that he is selfish. A normal healthy relationship would not isolate the partner or force them into a situation like this. Selfishly holding them on like this would hinder the partner’s growth and make them very unhealthy. If the mc had let her be free while doing something that makes her love him despite everything, that would be what you would call healthy. But well that’s just a headsup into whats healthy for you.

First comment award thus goes to u Alex.

Read it. World Building: 10/10 Plot: 11/10 Characters: 12/10 I am the author btw and I am rating it like this. What will u do about it?

It will be here from today night or at most tomorrow morning! I was outlining a bit. Now, we on the route back!

Just visit https : // ko-fi . com / coughblood Then donate from there. Remove the unnecessary spaces. I just added those to not get this comment shadow banned. Anyway. Guess I will have to get serious with Mind Demon again. Damn, I am excited for the First Suffering again.

I have the whole novel planned tbh, just does not have enough readers supporting it. I would starve if I focus too much on Mind Demon. I’d actually love to finish the novel since it would just be a few months of effort. And Mark’s journey is still unfinished. Not to mention all the setup I had done for the 6 sufferings—the epicness of those unwritten bits still nag heavily at me. Honestly, if you are willing to support the novel with a few castles, or better yet, support me as an author through my Kofi, I am willing to start writing the novel again with two chapters a day at the very least. Until the completion of the entire story. If it had the support I wanted, I’d have never stopped writing in the first place.

Yeah. That was indeed half the case. Sett honestly did have his own great achievements, for one he was much closer to Godhood than Neilara ever was. He conquered much more territory than her. He had much more allies. He was much more feared by the world than she was at her time. Even she herself would agree that he is a better ruler. But the shadow of great parents make even great achievements feel like smoke. Neilara was the better battle machine. He was merely the better ruler. And in history, the better fighters have more spotlight than the better rulers. After all, that is used as a standard for all the fighters who come after. Especially Neilara, who was one of the extremely rare case of two Axioms becoming one. For Sett, living in the shadow is one of his greatest regrets. And also one of his greatest motivators. In his last life, he was bound by genetics and Axiom, in this life, he is unbound. For once, he has the chance to leave the shadow.