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Minx_9993dReplied to Mid_Midassuperman has soaked in the sun longer then zod
However, General Zod quickly adapted and, spinning in the air, kicked Clark directly in the head to free up space, but... his suit was completely shattered.- Minx_99920dReplied to uzisho
Grim Reaper and Four Girlfriends
Wanda was standing with a terrifyingly, blank expression... - Minx_99920dReplied to Zeke_Arkhadiaxz
Grim Reaper and Four Girlfriends
Wanda was standing with a terrifyingly, blank expression... - Minx_99920dReplied to Bradley_Jude_4956
Grim Reaper and Four Girlfriends
Wanda was standing with a terrifyingly, blank expression... - Minx_99930dReplied to Dark_KastleCh 2 2 - REVERSAL
- Minx_99930dPosted
Your writing could benefit from some grammar touch-ups; consider using tools like Grammarly or even ChatGPT for assistance. While there's a lot to explore in terms of content, the story's development feels a bit stagnant. It sticks closely to the plot, but there haven't been any significant changes since Baam's introduction. To make it more engaging, adding depth to the characters and introducing new plot elements could really elevate the narrative. Nonetheless, it's still a fun read, and I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing how it progresses. I hope to see improvements in these areas over time, as they could draw in even more viewers. If this is your first fanfic or novel, you're doing a great job! I'll definitely keep reading your stories to see how you grow as a writer. Best of luck!
- Minx_99930dCommented
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The Vampire Diaries + The Originals - Minx_9991mthReplied to BonVoyage
HXH was out before Boruto in case u didn't know.
Without missing a beat, Rimuru's form shimmered, his limbs extending and twisting in impossible ways. He lunged forward, his sword seemingly coming from multiple directions at once, a blur of magisteel aimed at Gazel. - Minx_9991mthReplied to ItzVatsal12
ngl that genuinely creepy
"The rumors about you…" She stares into my eyes and stops. A second passes with her averting her eyes away from me as she continues; guess even the frozen heart cannot stop the allure of the Love Spot. "I didn't imagine you to be like this." - Minx_9991mthReplied to NeverKnowCh 10 Nindō 0010: Noticing a Discrepancy
- Minx_9991mthCommented
This don't flow right. No disrespect to the author. but overall, it a good chap.
Suddenly lust and desire filled Chena's eyes as the prospect of Kuzon being their house servant salivates her. - Minx_9991mthCommented
Rick and morty
Feel free to list all your recommendations for me to write here. - Minx_9991mthReplied to Riger82_So if I seal a target, I can change the inside of the pace such as by creating permanent lava lands or storm plains.
- Minx_9991mthReplied to nicknamefrfrThe Flaxans screamed, their unintelligible language echoing across the battlefield as Mark hurried to deal with them.
- Minx_9992mthCommented
Your personal life is first and foremost and everything is second so continue what you are doing hope u can get everything right.
Maybe you've noticed that the quality of the chapter editing has dropped a lot, well, I wish I had a great excuse for that, and I do: Basically I got dumped from my house and my life is a mess, so I'm not able to edit the chapters well. - Minx_9992mthReplied to DaoistvZHdIQThe wine flask
- Minx_9992mthCommentedCh 9 Imperial Academy
- Minx_9992mthPosted
Ok let me tell u the glaring problems. it the grammar it just flows unnaturally. u can use chat GPT or Grammarly to help with that everything else is fine for now just those problems if I find anything else I will change this review and make an updated one.
This book has been deleted. - Minx_9992mthCommented"Nah id win" a voice was heard over the radio. It was a random survivor.