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THE_omni_god
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2024-03-24 01:13

this novel's beginning has some similarities with the CUSTOM DEMON KING SYSTEM novel and it's been going great so imma let it marinate and come some month later..... i just hope you don't drop it . my opinion. i think the angel in the harem thing shouldn't work cause FIRST he is demonic and she will be angelic SECOND demons and Angels despise each other THIRD how is their opposing energies not going to hurt each other unless he becomes a nephilim or something anyways it's going great for now [chapter 32] and i am interested in how the author will solve that problem

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THE_omni_god
THE_omni_godLv14

this is the longest text iIhave ever written on this app

THE_omni_god
THE_omni_godLv14

and pls author don't make him a good guy in anyway cause you know he is a demon and no race particularly favours demon

CoughBlood
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All good, all good, Bro. If I do something, it will be done so after careful planning of all the implications!

Meruem_flixx
Meruem_flixxLv14

Yeah the start is so similar

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