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PokemonJoker
PokemonJokerLv31yr
2024-04-01 05:29

Honestly pretty boring. Grammar and Spelling are not the best. Multiple errors every chapter. The copy system idea is way to played out especially with the time limit. I read until chapter 13. The OC is boring and one dimensional. It’s way too similar to other fics. If I was told this was copied and pasted from something else and the names and some elements were changed I would not be surprised. Nothing new here if you have read an MHA fic you have read this one. Wish it was better

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xHelios
xHeliosLv14

I appreciate the sacrifice my guy 🫡

PizzaStopsTime
PizzaStopsTimeLv4

Id say to give it a read yourself. It’s a decent story and the grammar mistakes are barely noticeable. Definitely not worth the 2star rating that he gave

xHelios:I appreciate the sacrifice my guy 🫡
xHelios
xHeliosLv14

Nah it’s webnovel, 90% of these fics are usually abysmally average, if not outright terrible. I like to read for fun in my past time, but I also don’t like wasting it on substandard stories. Here’s some great authors for ex: Nimthewriter, Eyredragneel, Ghost_84, Eren_fraser, Zanarkand_kido, Teemvizzle, Lordofcactus, Themadlad

PizzaStopsTime:Id say to give it a read yourself. It’s a decent story and the grammar mistakes are barely noticeable. Definitely not worth the 2star rating that he gave
Aerian
AerianLv4

the author could have used chatgpt to refine his Novel

PizzaStopsTime:Id say to give it a read yourself. It’s a decent story and the grammar mistakes are barely noticeable. Definitely not worth the 2star rating that he gave
Alfiemooon
AlfiemooonLv4

chatgpt is terrible for stories. Any sort of AI is.

Aerian:the author could have used chatgpt to refine his Novel
Aerian
AerianLv4

you could technically just use it to correct your grammar and wording

Alfiemooon:chatgpt is terrible for stories. Any sort of AI is.
Nyxio
NyxioLv11

That’s not how it works. If author wants to correct grammar and minor mistakes then Grammarly is better. AI changes the text even if told not to.

Aerian:you could technically just use it to correct your grammar and wording
Aerian
AerianLv4

yes but if you give it specific instructions it wouldn't change the meaning

Nyxio:That’s not how it works. If author wants to correct grammar and minor mistakes then Grammarly is better. AI changes the text even if told not to.
KamikazeDrew
KamikazeDrewLv5

I lost all hope for decent grammar when I read the first sentence of the synopsis.

KamikazeDrew
KamikazeDrewLv5

Half the people you listed haven't updated in the last two months or have a story that has gone past thirty chapters before dropping them and starting a new one only to drop that one as well.

xHelios:Nah it’s webnovel, 90% of these fics are usually abysmally average, if not outright terrible. I like to read for fun in my past time, but I also don’t like wasting it on substandard stories. Here’s some great authors for ex: Nimthewriter, Eyredragneel, Ghost_84, Eren_fraser, Zanarkand_kido, Teemvizzle, Lordofcactus, Themadlad
MrSimo
MrSimoLv14

Grammarly is my personal corrector. its built to fix grammatical mistakes. i use it when writing essays.PS my first language is English.

Alfiemooon:chatgpt is terrible for stories. Any sort of AI is.
knighttino
knighttinoLv3

bro try this again onb its good

xHelios:Nah it’s webnovel, 90% of these fics are usually abysmally average, if not outright terrible. I like to read for fun in my past time, but I also don’t like wasting it on substandard stories. Here’s some great authors for ex: Nimthewriter, Eyredragneel, Ghost_84, Eren_fraser, Zanarkand_kido, Teemvizzle, Lordofcactus, Themadlad
RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

Our mc always ponder... and ponder ... then more ponder. He should be a panda.

MrIIIo
MrIIIoLv5

youd have to be very focused when letting it edit your story, at that point you should just use something else

Aerian:yes but if you give it specific instructions it wouldn't change the meaning
mahare2553
mahare2553Lv1

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I_Am_Tired
I_Am_TiredLv4

Thanks for the Author names, It gave me more stuff to read

xHelios:Nah it’s webnovel, 90% of these fics are usually abysmally average, if not outright terrible. I like to read for fun in my past time, but I also don’t like wasting it on substandard stories. Here’s some great authors for ex: Nimthewriter, Eyredragneel, Ghost_84, Eren_fraser, Zanarkand_kido, Teemvizzle, Lordofcactus, Themadlad
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