Alfiemooon

Second half of the story felt rushed. no real threat, or pay off. The MC got too powerful, too quickly, and the narrative sort of halted like 50 chapters ago.

Super devils

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fix him name😭 you've tried to give him a Japanese name, but spelt it In a way that's impossible in Japanese.

wrong onomatopoeia if the shield shattered

it's not just the plan I have an issue with. The poor prose, grammar, logic... The whole cast is dumbed down to make the MC look smarter because the author isn't clever enough to write intelligent characters. The plan itself isn't a plan at all. There's no nuance, remarks on political ramifications, no protection from leaks, no real structure etc. It's the delusions of a poor writer trying to appear better than they are. No thought has gone into it.

Big leap in logic dude I could be a professional hater for all you know. I've watched all of twilight, I don't think I need to say anything more, do I🤔

do they detach after extending? or has he now just got a bunch of chains sticking out his palm? surely that's limiting his movements.

where do these chains spawn from? the fights aren't very descriptive, so in my head they're just spawning in from nowhere, which looks ridiculous 😭

Take your time, I'll be waiting for the next chapter eagerly.