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My guy, the anime takes place in Japan. You wouldn't expect an American protagonist to be called Huan or vlad, no clue why you seem to think it's weebish for a Japanese show to have a Japanese protagonist. Your logic is so far removed from anybody with a sliver of intelligence; how you can be so confidently vacuous is beyond me.
Why have you got stage directions written? And why is every paragraph in a set of single comma's?
He waffles so much😭
Translation error there dude. the の particle show's possession. The thing you wrote more accurately translates to "the lightning gods' Angel".
Slightly confused on why he doesn't just cooperate.
How old is this kid? if he's puberty age he really shouldn't be struggling against the average women like that
You're wanking him a bit too much dude. Definitely not planetary. city level, absolutely. But no higher than that. He just doesn't have the scale.
whose* Oof the mistakes in here. 3am isn't 3aming like it did when I was a teenager😭
If this is the final, it feels very spontaneous; rather out of place here. Both sides are at their strongest, it feels like they're should be more going on in the background. I just don't see muzan taking a risk that big. also, it it just me, or is Shinobu screaming deathflags. Her arc has stagnated, feels like she's got nowhere else to go narratively and she's only person who's death' the readers would care about (other than the love Interests, but I don't see them dying).