I take it back; this is for those who are into the 'humiliation' genre. The main character is frustratingly incompetent—he hasn't even tried to develop his talent in the first 30 chapters, despite having the necessary fragments. The author attempts to make him resemble Sunny from "Shadow Slave," but fails miserably. At least Sunny is likable and somewhat intelligent. This character lacks common sense, and I’ve heard from others that the female lead is manipulative while the main character is a simp. Additionally, the writing style contains too many grammatical errors and relies on overly grand words just to inflate the word count. This novel had potential, but it's been squandered.
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There's no rush, this is a Novel proposed for over thousands of chapters. I don't understand why characters are being crucified for being dumb and not having common sense. Does one not need to be dumb in order to learn and become wise, does one not need to be weak to become strong. If the character is all you expect him to be in just 30 chapters of starting the novel how then should he grow, how should he learn, what are to be his experiences? on the long run is that not bound to bore the readers? I really do not understand why people crucify dumb characters. When I read novels I have always appreciated how characters learn, grow and the changes it makes to them, seeing someone greedy at the beginning now become a cheerful giver, seeing someone dumb at the beginning now become a very wise and calculating person is my joy when I read novels and I have longed for nothing but to recreate such experience, if that is not your type of novel then that's totally fine. And I tried to copy Sunny? The Honorable Devil of Antarctica, please do not sully his name, how could a mundane human like possibly do. While I do not deny Shadow Slave being an inspiration for my novel, I don't go ahead and copy characters, everyone here is different from everyone on Shadow Slave. Also, about the grammar, yea, that's a blunder on my path that started at the early days of my written, I wanted to impress you guys so much that I went overboard, my assumption is that the editor had made it more readable by now. But of course, the grammar gets way better in later chapters. Thank you for your review.
I am not against character growth, but even a 15year old kid from our world will use his power in a better way, atleast he should check whether he can evolve his talent or not ( he already have the crystals). If what you are saying is true, that it will get better in later chapters then i will read it.
what do you mean dude mc here seems kinda tall nothing like sunny
Yeah he doesn't use talent well at all...
