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PattyBu
PattyBuLv137mth
2024-06-16 03:54

at first it was nice and enjoying. it just turn dark and hard to read. Not sure what level of reading conprehention need to understand it. well love the MC and his adopted family. what trigger me is the other characterd. annoying and lunatic.i felt if everybody MC encounter are all villains? or good the guys are all crazy?what kind of school allow their principal which unstable and will to send kids to dead with 99.99% of death in a mission. major turn off. good luck author ,this nice novel just not my cup of tea. this giving me headaches and heartbreak poor mc🤣🤣🤣.

I Can Copy And Evolve Talents

RighteousFilth
3.7
763 Chs

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RighteousFilth
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I'm sorry, but it's not really dark. Yes, there are a lot of hardships, but it's all character growth. It will be an annoying journey, sure, but it will also be an interesting journey, and when you see the MC's growth due to those hardship, you'll later come to appreciate the role they played.

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RighteousFilth
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Author's divine review. After a hundred chapters. I have decided to drop a honest review of my work. Okay, for the first hundred chapters we focus on Northern and his sufferings. Even though this is a book about an overpowered character, my MC is not suddenly strong from the beginning. We see how this happens, how he survives in a realm of suffering and comes out different and strong. So, yes if you are expecting an overpowered character from the beginning this is not it. But I do promise you that following Northern would be a delightful experience. Next we have the characters. The characters are made to be so realistic, you'll meet dumb characters, you'll meet brilliant characters, some of them you will love some of them you will hate, but you'll find yourself unable to just quit the story... there's so much information, so much to say because Ul'Tra-el is just a magnificent world full of wonders, even I have not explored it all. I implore you to dive into this world with me. I'd love to take Northern's journey to the very end with you guys, till he becomes the pinnacle of not just one world but all worlds, till he marries, gives birth, grows old and die. I'm determined to see this to the end, so come with me. Thank you.

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HADE_Thoppil
HADE_ThoppilLv4

why is the author using complex sentences when there are simpler options ❓ first of all, writing style while explaining is weird which becomes harder with the author's choice of words. Author does not know how to end a topic. He or she just moves on with the next topic. i really don't like this way of writing

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BoNe_of_mY_SwORd
BoNe_of_mY_SwORdLv14

the thing with novels is if u want people to spend money on them , u need to get them hooked or at least curious enough to read past the free chapters . this one didn't manage to do that with me . the writing could be much better. the constantly shifting povs in the beginning, weird info dumps and complex classifications just makes it much harder to read . also i understand if his parents didn't want to teach him how to fight so that he could get a better technique later but why didn't they teach him anything? nothing about rifts or even how to use a monster core . and he barely uses his system. it's supposed to be his power why not use it ?

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fukkinchicken
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I love everything about this novel and I hope this gets enough exposure 'cuz It's just that great. Everything is well thought of; The Story, The Character Development, The Fights, The World Building, and The Mystery EVERYTHING! I approve, Author-san and I hope you don't butcher this 'cuz I really really love it.

9mth
dracula6969
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RedPandaK
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Cultured_Daoist69
Cultured_Daoist69Lv13

Grats fellow filthy brother on WPC🐐🐐🐐 THE GOATTT!🐐🐐

10mth
bigmadtoe
bigmadtoeLv4

bloated. so many words to convey so less. it's better than most of the trash here. It keeps going on and on and the story barely moves forward. Reading this feels like a chore

9mth
Faeth_
Faeth_Lv12

character progress is too slow it kill the mood

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Zerobeast
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