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DetachedDreamerLv141yr
2024-02-09 04:29

The grammar is abysmal. have to spend a portion of your mind auto correcting and ignoring the lack of attention the author put into editing. the idea certainly isn't bad, I like the concept, but I just don't think the MCs origins and the beginning of this story is fleshed out or expanded upon in anyway. basically just becomes a vampire, avoids Marcel and the new Orlean vamps with no problems, then just walks up to the originals in a way that would only threaten Klaus and leave no room for a fair trade or deal. I also dont think the author is committed enough to the details of the story.

Reincarnated in The originals as a human

Shadowking123
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Don’t read it if your gonna hate

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Tim_QQQLv1

this was a constructive comment, not even mean. grow some balls.

Shadowking123:Don’t read it if your gonna hate
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How about you grow some balls

Tim_QQQ:this was a constructive comment, not even mean. grow some balls.
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Joel_White_9434Lv14

Confused about the high rating of u don’t like it tho?

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Vedora_TempestLv13

Dude, why hate when he wrote what flaws your fic had? you can choose to improve the writing instead of hating..

Shadowking123:How about you grow some balls
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