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KenjigarLv41mth
2024-12-20 10:25

currently in chapter 85. At first, the story had a great start, MC is not dumb nor ignorant, the introduced characters are just right for the start, but then, it all went downhill at the secret realm arc. We were suddenly introduced to multiple powerhouses and even one god. It should 've been too early to introduce gods this early in the novel, one can't feel the true power of those beneath god-level if they suddenly appeared in the early stages. Even the world-building aspect sucks. We were just introduced to one city in the entire world let alone one continent or country but gods have already appeared!

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