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SKAJ
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2024-09-30 16:08

I'll list what I can from 20 chapters that I read so far 1. Lucifer is does not act like Lucifer would, but acts more like edgy MCs not at all what Lucifer does 2. Lucifer has been nerfed so bad that its really sad 3. Hermione got a AU backstory that pretty much made her soooo annoying and kills this whole fic (IMO) 4. Lucifer is a Angel/Devil and yet weak Magic from a mortal world works on him, someone who is over billions of years old from the dawn of time and creation itself, yet mortal magic from a 12 year old kid works on him like its nothing 5. Author does not explain when people comments on parts that make no sense and just likes ur comment and then ignores you Author please explain why that is 🤨

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SmutDxddy
SmutDxddyAuthor

In Starting Chapters, I was still in the early phase of writing. But, I have corrected those mistakes later on. About Lucifer's power factor, I have stated he's in a young body that hasn't adapted to his celestial powers yet. As Hogwarts years go on, he will come back to his full potential, destroy and torture people.

SKAJ
SKAJLv4

and thats the part that makes no sense, Lucifer IS the son of GOD not even GOD would make Lucifer weak or toy with his life like that and if this is some kind of multiverse higher being messing with him, GOD would not allow that, and if no other multiverse god is messing with him, rather Lucifer is in a kid body or not his powers should still be the same and can change back to his adult body, after all HE IS AN ANGEL/DEVIL with broken powers

SmutDxddy:In Starting Chapters, I was still in the early phase of writing. But, I have corrected those mistakes later on. About Lucifer's power factor, I have stated he's in a young body that hasn't adapted to his celestial powers yet. As Hogwarts years go on, he will come back to his full potential, destroy and torture people.
JustTiredOfPicking
JustTiredOfPickingLv11

wt can 'GOD' do if a' multiverse higher ' being wants to nerf him...nothing.XD

SKAJ:and thats the part that makes no sense, Lucifer IS the son of GOD not even GOD would make Lucifer weak or toy with his life like that and if this is some kind of multiverse higher being messing with him, GOD would not allow that, and if no other multiverse god is messing with him, rather Lucifer is in a kid body or not his powers should still be the same and can change back to his adult body, after all HE IS AN ANGEL/DEVIL with broken powers
Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

Well, very much, you have no idea of ​​the extent of God's power.

JustTiredOfPicking:wt can 'GOD' do if a' multiverse higher ' being wants to nerf him...nothing.XD
cayman_kelly
cayman_kellyLv1

So... is this the dc Lucifer(tv show) or not? cause Amenadiel is mentioned in description, in which case God is The Presence who is a high complex multiversal being and lucifer is stated to be the strongest under him. If so, no random multiversal being could interfere with him, they would die horribly, only an outerversal being could maybe affect him assuming The Presence lets it(cause creator beings have the three O's in their domains)

JustTiredOfPicking:wt can 'GOD' do if a' multiverse higher ' being wants to nerf him...nothing.XD
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