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makes no sense to me... You follow canon way too much, you beat Ron up and prevent the golden trio but in the next chapter it's like nothing happened and follows the original plot with an extra character...

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You took the book/movie, added Luci and made Hermione even more annoying than before in the most unnatural of ways...and she is what? 11 in the 1st year. Absolutely Trippin.

So far my opiniond on the book isn't all that great but it has a limited amount to be fair. The idea of Lucifer being the MC was what enticed me to begin reading this but it seems its just another character mingling in with the golden trio, since he also joined Gryffindor. I'll let it cool cook for now and MAYBE come back later

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1.- Copy and paste (the book original). 2.- The fanfic have main protagonist to Hermione. 3.- Lucifer is secondary character. 4.- World background: only Hogwarts.

Writing Quality is Readable. The Story seems the exact same as The Books/Movies. Character Design is Stale. Updating Stability is fine. World Background isn't anything special but adequate.

I'll list what I can from 20 chapters that I read so far 1. Lucifer is does not act like Lucifer would, but acts more like edgy MCs not at all what Lucifer does 2. Lucifer has been nerfed so bad that its really sad 3. Hermione got a AU backstory that pretty much made her soooo annoying and kills this whole fic (IMO) 4. Lucifer is a Angel/Devil and yet weak Magic from a mortal world works on him, someone who is over billions of years old from the dawn of time and creation itself, yet mortal magic from a 12 year old kid works on him like its nothing 5. Author does not explain when people comments on parts that make no sense and just likes ur comment and then ignores you Author please explain why that is 🤨

Just another canon with extra character. Nothing much changed