cayman_kelly

It has a strong start and good lore for a light hearted story, mc is a smart happy-go-lucky character not afraid to revel in vices which is a nice change, immaturity is obv but not upsetting, with that said, this is a negative review first like 200 chapters are pretty solid, a spot or two pop up, then, boom, full on racism. Not like 'his eyes are funny' but like 'capture all Japanese(Island Nation) for drug, gene and virus experiments and torture till death or worse,' same issue with china, starts off being called the empire, vague references to how it's at least a little better than other countries in their treatment of orphans, then its called 'the Divine Dragon Empire' that's better than everywhere else, and who everyone hates on cause their so much better and stronger and kinder. Corporations are the enemy, Sects are the Friends etc etc,

chapter 21 is out

Technically the Uzumaki were Senju allies primarily, and recognized as 'part of' Konoha due to their close relationship with the Senju(from the wiki) I haven't read much of this fic and what I did was well over a year ago but i like it when potholes are rationalized, even without hashirama and tobirama the Senju still had Mito Uzumaki, the nine tails and the Uzumaki clan as support, objectively the strongest clan. If a clan with such strength existed it would could and probably did strain hiruzens rule as the Third, no one wants subordinates who don't listen or worse, listens to others(i'm not saying it happened, i'm saying if it were real, it would have happened) now as a story based around Naruto, we obv don't know the political machinations from several decades before he existed, what we DO know is by the time of naruto: No Senju Clan, No Uzumaki Clan, No Uchiha Clan, and we know For certain what happened to one. Now IF the Senju were causing issues, using Mito, the Uzumaki and the legacy of the previous hokages(intentionally or not), removing these supports, and ensuring it can't happen again is feasible, like say, waiting for Mito to die, not helping the Senju's primary ally(Uzumaki) then suppressing the Senju's(or sending them to die in war)

Thanks but i was already all caught up i was just deciphering lol

I haven't read anything other than the synopsis, with that said, where do you live that raising a war orphan as a child soldier is common sense????

I haven't read hxh in years but i know not all nen have an activation requirement, with some logical reasoning: Nen is universal, each person can awaken it(hypothetically) Nen has Types, each type has different affinities and specializations (to me knowledge)Nen quantity, Nen Vows and Nen restrictions are not Type specific, ei they are universal Now here's where my knowledge is lacking, are activation conditions Type specific? or universal? Because if they are universal they are most likely a Nen Restriction, otherwise it would have been explained separately when ways to strengthen Nen were listed

I haven't read much but it's night and day compared to the mtl, they are written like actual people here

I got it, it's written like the synopsis on the back of a book, like a paperback

This author only uses AI, you can tell 1: by the way the description is written, i don't know how to explain other than, they all have a 'tone' exactly like this, The second way is: when a synopsis is ai written its all clumped together and, if the poster is lazy, it'll stay that way, if you check this accounts old uploads you'll notice this issue, at least they learned to hit the enter key a couple times before posting the ai synopsis

the combo is 123456