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Max1mus
Max1musAuthor1yr
2024-01-16 05:27

Hey guys, Max1mus here! Here is my shameless Author Review. I have tried my best to enhance the reader experience of this translation work. Hope you have a good time reading it. If you do or don't leave a review either way. Also if you have questions about the novel you could comment under this review and I will gladly answer.

HP: Bad Intentions

Max1mus
4.0
443 Chs

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Qingno
QingnoLv4

Nice novel and good work on the editing and translation of the book. Also could pls share the link if the original

1yr
OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15

The story includes an 'abandoned' tag. Does that mean the original author abandoned the story? or that a character within the story is abandoned?

1yr
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LemonZawodowiec
LemonZawodowiecLv5

if you like this kind of work maybe you could consider pursuing a path of Localizer? with the recent drama there may be a few open job postings in the sector

1yr
GamersYarik
GamersYarikLv1

The author writes actively, two hours ago he uploaded the last chapter

OukisLips:The story includes an 'abandoned' tag. Does that mean the original author abandoned the story? or that a character within the story is abandoned?
1yr
1
Michele_Lopes
Michele_LopesLv14

I liked this novel só far. thanxx for the updates

11mth
Zomvenom
ZomvenomLv13

The story's good, but the improper spelling of the spell names and the gender bender shit that you as a translator, saw it and kept it, is just disappointing.

7mth
1
SrMagnus
SrMagnusLv2

How do you prevent your novel from getting taken down due to copyright?

3mth
Other Reviews
R0B
R0BLv2

Good fanfic, but bad translation. Don't get me wrong, the translation and grammar is understandable. The problem is that this fanfic use vague words for names, skills, items and etc. For example "invisible monster"... Even now I have no clue what kind of monster is that... Just give it a name... The same problem happens everytime some sort of name is used...

1yr

larkin_klarkin
larkin_klarkinLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
harrisdavidwilliam
harrisdavidwilliamLv4

it is readable, but the problem is the name of the spell and the name if the magical animals are wrong, like the invisible animal, its seems like its a demiguise, also the transformation magic, the right one is transfiguration, also the phantasm shift isnt it apparition, he even named an acramantula spider as an eight eyed giant spider, even some of the magical plant named are wrong

1yr
Bouncy_Beast
Bouncy_BeastLv4

first word of the first chapter is "Summon the guardian" and two sentences after that theres a "staff" not then a spell called "Phantom transportation" lol. if you don't see the problem let me help you, they are the translator's synonyms for "Expecto patronum, wand, and apparition". at least try to read what you are uploading author.

5mth
Sidecharacter1
Sidecharacter1Lv14

Currently in the third chapter. I am the first reviewer besides the Author. Great work so far. I hope it stays like that. Keep it up Author-San! Also if you like Naruto you could check my fanfic Naruto: Mixed Heritage

1yr
faesr
faesrLv14

harem////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

4mth
Acuario
AcuarioLv5

Jajajaajaajajj,Esa sipnosis me gano,ojalá la historia sea igual de buena ............................. ................................... ..... ........

1yr
jakom
jakomLv12

Aah yes. I've just read the first five chapters Nd I already want more

1yr
Herbivore
HerbivoreLv2

I love that story, that can become a master class for sure ! I really want to read more Haha !

1yr
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