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ArchProgenitorLv141yr
2024-01-19 16:52

Hope he stops trying to run back to his sad life and sees the bigger picture of his fortunate circumstances 馃槩 馃檹 馃様... He's been getting annoyingly idiotic!!!

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TheManUnderTheBedAuthor

What do you mean? If you think he wants to go back to Coruscant undercity he doesn鈥檛. He just knew he needed to lie low for a while before being able to go wherever he wanted.

ArchProgenitorLv14

But that's my point... He should see the pros of staying outweighing the cons 馃檮 He should lay low.... Yes , But not when you messed up enough for hundreds of thousands of lives to depend on you... You also said he has battle instinct so he should at least come to terms with his scenario and modify it to obtain maximum benefits

TheManUnderTheBed:What do you mean? If you think he wants to go back to Coruscant undercity he doesn鈥檛. He just knew he needed to lie low for a while before being able to go wherever he wanted.
TheManUnderTheBedAuthor

That鈥檚 not very realistic for his character, he has no personal connection with anyone to make him want to stay and help in the war. He鈥檚 fifteen years old, up until this point his only goal has been getting out and having a better life, why would he fight for the republic? That being said that will not be his attitude forever. He hasn鈥檛 been in a proper battle yet nor has he experienced a war zone, and the horrors that follow with it. He only recently unlocked his ability to use the force, he is able to use a passive form of battle meditation but not in the way you are suggesting.

ArchProgenitor:But that's my point... He should see the pros of staying outweighing the cons 馃檮 He should lay low.... Yes , But not when you messed up enough for hundreds of thousands of lives to depend on you... You also said he has battle instinct so he should at least come to terms with his scenario and modify it to obtain maximum benefits
ArchProgenitorLv14

it's not about helping people, bruh..... He's from the slums so he should be sharp and calculative, right? What I'm saying is that he can even use the clones to gather tech for him to use, and they will obey without questions since the admiral is powerless outside the ship..... So he should see the pros... But only after you've seen them, I guess

TheManUnderTheBed:That鈥檚 not very realistic for his character, he has no personal connection with anyone to make him want to stay and help in the war. He鈥檚 fifteen years old, up until this point his only goal has been getting out and having a better life, why would he fight for the republic? That being said that will not be his attitude forever. He hasn鈥檛 been in a proper battle yet nor has he experienced a war zone, and the horrors that follow with it. He only recently unlocked his ability to use the force, he is able to use a passive form of battle meditation but not in the way you are suggesting.
TheManUnderTheBedAuthor

That wouldn鈥檛 work, clones aren鈥檛 like droids they can recognise when their orders are wrong, and can even turn on their general. Like in the clone wars when the Jedi general gave them harsh orders and ended up killing a bunch of them. Point being Jaden wants to disappear, acting suspicious by sending clones to scavange technology for him would be stupid, it would be an easy way to get caught. if he gets discovered then it鈥檚 the Jedi order and republic that are going to come down on him. And you want him to risk that by taking advantage of his new position? that wouldn鈥檛 be very sharp of him.

ArchProgenitor:it's not about helping people, bruh..... He's from the slums so he should be sharp and calculative, right? What I'm saying is that he can even use the clones to gather tech for him to use, and they will obey without questions since the admiral is powerless outside the ship..... So he should see the pros... But only after you've seen them, I guess
ArchProgenitorLv14

who's going to catch him in a war zone... plus he would make up an excuse like enhancing the clones blasters or something to help the. win of course and they would obey readily as the orders won't be wrong unless he's being reckless

TheManUnderTheBed:That wouldn鈥檛 work, clones aren鈥檛 like droids they can recognise when their orders are wrong, and can even turn on their general. Like in the clone wars when the Jedi general gave them harsh orders and ended up killing a bunch of them. Point being Jaden wants to disappear, acting suspicious by sending clones to scavange technology for him would be stupid, it would be an easy way to get caught. if he gets discovered then it鈥檚 the Jedi order and republic that are going to come down on him. And you want him to risk that by taking advantage of his new position? that wouldn鈥檛 be very sharp of him.
TheManUnderTheBedAuthor

Other Jedi that are also present, it can easily be proven he鈥檚 not a Jedi by asking him any number of questions. That excuse wouldn鈥檛 work either, so what he鈥檚 gonna spend all his time upgrading thousands of blasters all while he鈥檚 at war? And even if he is only using that as an excuse what happens if they say okay, and the blasters aren鈥檛 upgraded. Nothing about the plan is smart, the best thing he can do is not draw attention to himself, conform until he can disappear and they assume he died.

ArchProgenitor:who's going to catch him in a war zone... plus he would make up an excuse like enhancing the clones blasters or something to help the. win of course and they would obey readily as the orders won't be wrong unless he's being reckless
ArchProgenitorLv14

then let him ask his teacher to help him cover his tracks... Literally, you're just making up excuses to not do it 馃槖 馃檮 馃槕

TheManUnderTheBed:Other Jedi that are also present, it can easily be proven he鈥檚 not a Jedi by asking him any number of questions. That excuse wouldn鈥檛 work either, so what he鈥檚 gonna spend all his time upgrading thousands of blasters all while he鈥檚 at war? And even if he is only using that as an excuse what happens if they say okay, and the blasters aren鈥檛 upgraded. Nothing about the plan is smart, the best thing he can do is not draw attention to himself, conform until he can disappear and they assume he died.
TheManUnderTheBedAuthor

Ask his holographic teacher to help him cover his tracks? You have to be trolling because there鈥檚 no way you can actually think these ideas are in anyway logical 馃槀 If you keep replying nonsense I鈥檒l just delete them. Enjoy your reading 馃憤馃徎

ArchProgenitor:then let him ask his teacher to help him cover his tracks... Literally, you're just making up excuses to not do it 馃槖 馃檮 馃槕
ArchProgenitorLv14

not cover tracks bro.... how old are you cos you seem to be the one trolling here. you said jedi order can ask him questions only jedi can answer and I said why not ask his holocron teacher to prepare him... Narrow mindedness at its finest, srsly!!

TheManUnderTheBed:Ask his holographic teacher to help him cover his tracks? You have to be trolling because there鈥檚 no way you can actually think these ideas are in anyway logical 馃槀 If you keep replying nonsense I鈥檒l just delete them. Enjoy your reading 馃憤馃徎
TheManUnderTheBedAuthor

A teacher that was born thousands of years before current Jedi? One who wouldn鈥檛 know know any current events or if anything had changed in the Jedi. Just admit it鈥檚 a bad idea. Cause it just sounds like you don鈥檛 know anything about Stars or logic in general 馃檮

ArchProgenitor:not cover tracks bro.... how old are you cos you seem to be the one trolling here. you said jedi order can ask him questions only jedi can answer and I said why not ask his holocron teacher to prepare him... Narrow mindedness at its finest, srsly!!
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

I don't know anything about star wars but I will give this a try. Hope there is harem and lemons

TheManUnderTheBed:That鈥檚 not very realistic for his character, he has no personal connection with anyone to make him want to stay and help in the war. He鈥檚 fifteen years old, up until this point his only goal has been getting out and having a better life, why would he fight for the republic? That being said that will not be his attitude forever. He hasn鈥檛 been in a proper battle yet nor has he experienced a war zone, and the horrors that follow with it. He only recently unlocked his ability to use the force, he is able to use a passive form of battle meditation but not in the way you are suggesting.
TheManUnderTheBedAuthor

Sabaroth_zarkiel:I don't know anything about star wars but I will give this a try. Hope there is harem and lemons
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Harem recommendation :ahsoka Tano, padme, hera, ventress, Bo-katan,fennac, Aayla, luminara, reva sevandar, barris , norra waxley, Darth talon, darth zannah, nomi sunrider, tahiri veila, Shira brie

TheManUnderTheBed:
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Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

I sent you a harem recommendation check it out and yes I know some of the characters I mentioned are already dead or not born but I thought you could add them to the story by changing them a little or by changing the story a little like a AU or something, I couldn't find a lot of good looking female characters that were alive during the clone wars that's why I mentioned them

TheManUnderTheBed:
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TheManUnderTheBedAuthor

Take a look at Aubrie Wyn and Zule Xiss.

Sabaroth_zarkiel:I sent you a harem recommendation check it out and yes I know some of the characters I mentioned are already dead or not born but I thought you could add them to the story by changing them a little or by changing the story a little like a AU or something, I couldn't find a lot of good looking female characters that were alive during the clone wars that's why I mentioned them
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

They are good, are there any more? I don't know anything about star wars the previous recommendation that I gave was after 2 hours of research to see which female characters were around Mc's age and those were the ones I found though I ended up adding a few more since they were good looking and strong

TheManUnderTheBed:Take a look at Aubrie Wyn and Zule Xiss.
TheManUnderTheBedAuthor

Tbh I鈥檓 not sure if I鈥檒l do a big harem I wanna keep it relatively small. But in regards to your question the Daughter is someone I鈥檝e been eyeing. Shaak ti, Maris brood

Sabaroth_zarkiel:They are good, are there any more? I don't know anything about star wars the previous recommendation that I gave was after 2 hours of research to see which female characters were around Mc's age and those were the ones I found though I ended up adding a few more since they were good looking and strong
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Well even if we just take females from Mc's timeline then we would have a big harem : ahsoka Tano padme, hera ventress, Bo-katan, fennac, barris,luminara,norra waxley, sheek ti, maris brood, reva sevandar. they all are pretty good and as they say the more the merrier 馃槒

TheManUnderTheBed:Tbh I鈥檓 not sure if I鈥檒l do a big harem I wanna keep it relatively small. But in regards to your question the Daughter is someone I鈥檝e been eyeing. Shaak ti, Maris brood
TheManUnderTheBedAuthor

Yeah she is pretty good

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