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Good question tbh. Idk if his metagene acted as a catalyst for his survival or whether it’s a constant that he needs in order to have a connection to it.
Maybe keep comments like this to yourself until the chapter is actually finished. Otherwise you’ll probably just end up looking foolish. 🤷🏻♂️
Yeah but she doesn’t know that
The way I see it is Ethan has to spend a lot of processing power eliminating all the ways that he could be tracked. Robin only needed to find one way to track him and its not like he isn’t smart in his own right. Genius doesn’t mean infallible.
If the turtle is a metagene power then yes And you’re assuming he already isn’t related to the Kanes.
Pretty much all wrong
Stop reading bro 👍🏻
Both of your criticisms have already been addressed. It’s already been heavily implied that the MC is vulnerable to his emotions. This has been done on purpose. A normal person has a lifetime of experience dealing with strong emotions, the MC however has never had that. His life so far has been so predictable and boring that there was never any need to feel anger or frustration. (With the exception of when he was very young). You’re also mistaken on what he wants to become. The MC does not want to become a hero, though it’s easy to understand why you’d make that mistake if you don’t read between the lines as it’s not made entirely in the early chapters. But if you want spoilers then the MC doesn’t want to be a hero he wants to be humanities saviour, he believes that he was specifically given All for One because only he could bring about a perfect world. Basically a world without crime. His goal becomes clearer after the first Arc when he’s dealt with Iron Row. But yeah. I don’t mind criticism, not everyone is gonna like the story and that’s okay. Just felt the need to make things clear.
Funny how if you’d read literally a couple paragraphs more you would’ve seen an example of his morals when he refuses to kill Renee because she isn’t a criminal. There is a romance tag because there will be romance, how that is introduced will be shown in the future regardless of if you believe it’s possible. If you want to stop reading then that’s within your right, but there is no need to announce it to everyone. Its a bit cringe. 👍🏻