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DaoOfEgg
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2024-02-08 05:38

Review Highlights: Writing Quality: The writing quality, encompassing style, punctuation, and grammar, initially had some flaws, but it significantly improved in later chapters. The diverse use of adjectives keeps the style engaging. Despite occasional grammar errors, it merits a solid 5-star rating. Updating Stability: Consistently delivering chapters on time earns this aspect a perfect 5-star rating. Story Development: The narrative promises a lengthy journey, with potential challenges for the main character. The hope for individually crafted trials adds an intriguing layer to the story. While currently deserving of 5 stars, future developments may influence this rating, albeit with slim chances of change. Character Design: Remarkably rare on WebNovel, this story excels in character depth, avoiding a sole focus on the protagonist. It earns an easy 5 stars. World Background: Despite fanfics typically relying on pre-existing worlds, this story stands out for its unique world-building efforts. Custom elements add depth without straying too far from familiar settings. Another deserving 5-star rating. Personal Reflections: Personally drawn to analytical main characters, I found this story particularly appealing. Yet, it offers more than just intellect, delving into emotional depth and kindness. Additionally, the author's engagement with readers, receptiveness to feedback, and dedication elevate the reading experience. This is not only a captivating story but also a testament to the author's commitment to their audience. Apologies for the lengthy text, but I hope readers will find value in these insights, as they were crafted with care and consideration.

Trials of the Multiverse

Slayer_King_One
4.6
176 Chs

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Slayer_King_One
Slayer_King_OneAuthor

I love this review. Thank you for being honest and really taking the time to describe my novel. I appreciate you for being so thoughtful!

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Original_Eternal
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Review Highlights: Writing Quality: professional novel writer grade (level 10) Updating Stability: not enough i want more Story Development: unlike most world travel novels here mc actually has a goal which he must complete Character Design: despite being a fanfic most characters from mc's families are originals in all the trials yet despite being a fanfic World Background: as i said above mc and his family are extras so we can get a new perspective compared to original mc's who think a lot differently than our mc hence it's like a slightly new world(i mean cid thinks completely different than our mc ) here you can thank me

Slayer_King_One:I love this review. Thank you for being honest and really taking the time to describe my novel. I appreciate you for being so thoughtful!
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Slayer_King_One
Slayer_King_OneAuthor

yeah, this review is really helpful, lol. I'm glad you're enjoying my novel, but I'm more amused by the fact you went out of your way to reply to a comment in another review rather than making a separate one

Original_Eternal:Review Highlights: Writing Quality: professional novel writer grade (level 10) Updating Stability: not enough i want more Story Development: unlike most world travel novels here mc actually has a goal which he must complete Character Design: despite being a fanfic most characters from mc's families are originals in all the trials yet despite being a fanfic World Background: as i said above mc and his family are extras so we can get a new perspective compared to original mc's who think a lot differently than our mc hence it's like a slightly new world(i mean cid thinks completely different than our mc ) here you can thank me
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Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

i already used my review and hence couldn't upload it directly anymore

Slayer_King_One:yeah, this review is really helpful, lol. I'm glad you're enjoying my novel, but I'm more amused by the fact you went out of your way to reply to a comment in another review rather than making a separate one
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Slayer_King_One
Slayer_King_OneAuthor

ohhh, I see! Still, it's really helpful to me, so I'm grateful

Original_Eternal:i already used my review and hence couldn't upload it directly anymore
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masterkiritojj
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Is mc villainous?

Slayer_King_One:I love this review. Thank you for being honest and really taking the time to describe my novel. I appreciate you for being so thoughtful!
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Slayer_King_One
Slayer_King_OneAuthor

he grows into an anti-hero role. He's not exactly a villain.

masterkiritojj:Is mc villainous?
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