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DarkMouth
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2024-01-04 04:08

It's early to give proper judgment to this novel, as not much has happened yet, but to me, it's already a really good and executed novel.I like the concept, the MC is not braindead and actually, I think he's one of the smartest ff MC to date.I truly hope this will continue to deliver such good quality content, but for as long as I've read, I was not disappointed at all. You should definitively give this a try!

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Anitimesc
AnitimescLv15

Does the MC have a harem?

DarkMouth
DarkMouthLv4

we have yet to see any romance

Anitimesc:Does the MC have a harem?
KaratePepe
KaratePepeLv4

any romance yet?

DarkMouth:we have yet to see any romance
Slayer_King_One
Slayer_King_OneAuthor

KaratePepe:any romance yet?
DarkMouth
DarkMouthLv4

the author already replied but in short: yes. It's also confirmed to be not harem but at most 2-3 girls

KaratePepe:any romance yet?
DarkMouth
DarkMouthLv4

there is romance now

KaratePepe:any romance yet?
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