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2024-01-09 01:10

This novel has a higher standard than 90% of the things I've read on webnovel. It's incredible! I've read my fair share of books but most of them fall short after the first few chapters. I cannot find a single thing I do not like, which is incredible!

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Yorgan
YorganLv12

is not webnovel fault if you only read tr*sh danmachi fanfics

Yorgan
YorganLv12

I will still start to read it, just waiting some more chapters, most author drop the fics before reaching the 70ish mark so i just wait a little more.

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DaoistJ9ezqc
DaoistJ9ezqcLv2

that's a good choice in my opinion, but you should at least save this in the library. If it can go even past 50 chapters, this novel will have a good success in my opinion. It's got an interesting and unique vibe

Yorgan:I will still start to read it, just waiting some more chapters, most author drop the fics before reaching the 70ish mark so i just wait a little more.
Sen_Ritsu
Sen_RitsuLv13

Yorgan:is not webnovel fault if you only read tr*sh danmachi fanfics
ABOVE_HAVENES
ABOVE_HAVENESLv4

man I hate that verse

Yorgan:is not webnovel fault if you only read tr*sh danmachi fanfics
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DaoOfEgg
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