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Daoist740160
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2024-01-28 05:51

I feel compelled to give this novel a serious, completely out of BS review. The novel is great. Superb even. The writing quality is high enough that I never noticed a single mistake so far. Updates are fairly reliable. The Designs of the characters are incredible(It appears to me that the Author is really using what his Patrons give him to get some nice art for the characters of his novel, so I think it's cool). The only thing I have noticed was a little behind everything is the World Building, but that's because this novel doesn't really need it to achieve its purpose. I would still like to read more about the specific Trial's World a little more. I am speaking really highly of the novel, so you may ask why not 5 star review? It's because I think this novel has potential to grow beyond fake 5 star reviews. I don't want my 5 star review to be just one of those fakes you see all over webnovel. I truly do think this novel, this author, have incredible potential to do well. This review is my personal advice to anyone wishing to read something geniune. I will be reading everyday for your chapters, author. I hope you will not disappoint us. In the end, all I want to say, is thank you for posting this story. I have once again gained the curiosity behind fanfictions that had been missing for the past few years.

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Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

this convinced me alright, ima also read the novel and stop judging things with reviews for a while.

Daoist740160
Daoist740160Lv4

I'm glad this convinced you.

Ireallylikereading:this convinced me alright, ima also read the novel and stop judging things with reviews for a while.
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DarkMouth
DarkMouthLv4

we still have no idea about the FL

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The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

I'll come back when he's done with the trials because that is when the real story starts after all unless he has the ability to travel back to the trial worlds then none of the interactions he has with the characters in the trials worlds matter.

Daoist740160
Daoist740160Lv4

from how the author described it so far, it seems the world after the trials is actually the epilogue, so I highly doubt that. Also, the author has hinted here and there that he will be able to return.

The_Dark_Hydrax:I'll come back when he's done with the trials because that is when the real story starts after all unless he has the ability to travel back to the trial worlds then none of the interactions he has with the characters in the trials worlds matter.
The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Daoist740160:from how the author described it so far, it seems the world after the trials is actually the epilogue, so I highly doubt that. Also, the author has hinted here and there that he will be able to return.
Lacuna_Kimono
Lacuna_KimonoLv14

I shall also come back later, but it'll be saved

The_Dark_Hydrax:I'll come back when he's done with the trials because that is when the real story starts after all unless he has the ability to travel back to the trial worlds then none of the interactions he has with the characters in the trials worlds matter.
The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Lacuna_Kimono:I shall also come back later, but it'll be saved
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Tiktark
TiktarkLv14

if he has to face saitama.... then he will have to literally become a God or.multiversal level God as Saitama is too op

zeyad_Mahmoud
zeyad_MahmoudLv4

well if he really faced saitama and at least can't destroy a universe with one punch then he is cooked

Tiktark:if he has to face saitama.... then he will have to literally become a God or.multiversal level God as Saitama is too op
UnwantedGod
UnwantedGodLv12

is this a harem? pls say no.

Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

SPOILER it's a minor spoiler which only talks about the power level of a character mc once met a trial taker from 70th floor and she was capable of destroying a solar system by just thinking about it despite holding back

zeyad_Mahmoud:well if he really faced saitama and at least can't destroy a universe with one punch then he is cooked
Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

i wonder why i can hear oogways voice while reading your comment

Daoist740160:I'm glad this convinced you.
masterkiritojj
masterkiritojjLv2

Is MC villainous?

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DaoOfEgg
DaoOfEggLv4

Review Highlights: Writing Quality: The writing quality, encompassing style, punctuation, and grammar, initially had some flaws, but it significantly improved in later chapters. The diverse use of adjectives keeps the style engaging. Despite occasional grammar errors, it merits a solid 5-star rating. Updating Stability: Consistently delivering chapters on time earns this aspect a perfect 5-star rating. Story Development: The narrative promises a lengthy journey, with potential challenges for the main character. The hope for individually crafted trials adds an intriguing layer to the story. While currently deserving of 5 stars, future developments may influence this rating, albeit with slim chances of change. Character Design: Remarkably rare on WebNovel, this story excels in character depth, avoiding a sole focus on the protagonist. It earns an easy 5 stars. World Background: Despite fanfics typically relying on pre-existing worlds, this story stands out for its unique world-building efforts. Custom elements add depth without straying too far from familiar settings. Another deserving 5-star rating. Personal Reflections: Personally drawn to analytical main characters, I found this story particularly appealing. Yet, it offers more than just intellect, delving into emotional depth and kindness. Additionally, the author's engagement with readers, receptiveness to feedback, and dedication elevate the reading experience. This is not only a captivating story but also a testament to the author's commitment to their audience. Apologies for the lengthy text, but I hope readers will find value in these insights, as they were crafted with care and consideration.

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