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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv56mth
2024-11-08 03:53

I have managed to read till chapter 165 before I lost interest. The plot itself is shallow with no real depth to it. All the characters seemingly kiss the ground the MC walks under, including Dumbledore himself, for no good reason. The author follows the books plot all the time even though the MC has no risen to do it. Till chapter 165 I have gradually found myself losing interest till I eventually dropped it. Though the system in this fanfic was nice and the prizes the MC gets were also good, the grammar itself was also excellent with nearly no mistakes.

The Strongest Dark Lord

Mysteryon
4.4
356 Chs

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Facundo_Juarez
Facundo_JuarezLv1

The story was good, it's a shame it's a pathetic harem between 12 and 13 year olds. It doesn't make any sense. ................................

1yr

Trojan_HeartVirus
Trojan_HeartVirusLv2

Reveal spoiler

10mth
Kancha_T
Kancha_TLv5

This is a pretty good translation. And the MC is interesting. Everyone knows his nature but he is still operating in plain sight. I loved that! usually the MC hides and plans and so on... it's gotten boring. Kudos on this wonderful editing and i hope to see this continued.

1yr
ItzVatsal12
ItzVatsal12Lv14

It's really good. Much beter than most of Harry Potter book. [img=recommend]

1yr
Trouxa_157
Trouxa_157Lv3

So far everything is very good, the MC is interesting, the system doesn't influence him, which in my point of view is great. That's it for now, I'll wait for more updates, I just hope that the Translator doesn't abandon this work midway.

1yr
FallenAngelN
FallenAngelNLv11

Eh, it was great for awhile, and you could see effort at first, but then the story became lazy Chinese Manhua trash. Where the MC keeps putting people in their place while catching underage harem members like they're Pokemon. A shame really.

1yr
thescorpiona
thescorpionaLv14

im pretty sure i read the mtl of this a while ago, it is pretty good from what i remember. pls continue translating this for people who dislike mtl(havent checked the quality,hope its good)

1yr
Lecc
LeccLv14

A great story, with a decently well written MC but it has one flaw, it really has a Harem of 12-13 year olds. I do find that disturbing in so many levels, I'm just glad it hasn't escalated beyond kisses on the cheek. But I really can't with a REINCARNATOR having a harem of little girls. The author could have atleast waited till they were further along near the end of the books to escalate into this. (I know this is translated). It does spoil the story a bit, but if you look past that this whole arc is pretty well made. If you're like me and read basically all the HP fanfics possible. This one sits in the middle because of what is stated above, if not it would be in the top cut.

1yr
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Translator doesn't change all the cringe lines by MC when talking to any female character but changes actual interaction. A kiss on the lips gets changed to a light brush of a kiss to the cheek. Why? What the f is this? Changing such a minor thing but leaving all the cringe unchanged. dropped trash. Also MC seems to focus on gacha the whole time, havent seen him train ONCE.

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

The TL and updates are quite good, but the story is just meh. Nothing about it that makes me want to keep reading, zero conflict, hence zero plot.

1yr
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