It starts very well, honestly, although the beginning is forced and an event happens for him to go to the league of shadows just because of the reason that the author wants to get the waifus there, the plot starts well for a fanfic... But everything it goes downhill when there is descendant drama, and these multiverse OP entities meddling in the MC's life. Why can't we just have a direct reincarnation? Why does he need to reconcile with his system? Why does it have to be so complicated? Now, in the recent chapter, he was an existence similar to an Edritch god, he was unique, now thanks to his SIMP for his death, he 'forcibly' signed a kind of contract for his soul to be handed over to her if he died thus completely losing its unique status. Yes, this had a lot of potential, but it was completely destroyed by the pointless drama, and these multiverse beings that keep sprouting out of nowhere. It's only the 20th chapter, it's at the power level of a city destroyer, but these beings keep appearing like flies, meh.
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LIKEare you author smurf coz you seem to take pesonal responsiblity of defending this novel
I support this guy and he's had lots of hater's even before I said that. It's annoying and he's even stated it that he's tired of people dictating how he should write his story. Instead of writing a useless response actually realize people doing "criticism' like that only makes people want to give up writing. Because y'all annoying af tbh
Hey there are alot of readers who read the reviews before going for the fanfiction so as not to waste time reading some trash and reviews like this helps a lot . so yeah don't go simping author by complaining reviewers
Wasting time making a long and dumb review lol ok you would know a lot about reading trash that I believe!! Your entire profile is full of Simping so you can't talk 🤣🤣🖕