It's a great and interesting Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like that MC/Orion not op from start (he even weaker than other First Year when he go to Hogwarts).. I like his power (absorb other magical power/creature to make him stronger).. I also like his pet/familiar Red, is rare to see others phoenix beside Fawkes, hope to see/read Red more in the future.. The story is interesting too.. To see Merlin memory, magic power level, etc.. I like that he train Rune, Magic Bender, etc,, to supplement/protect himself from others (especially bully like Malfoy and his gang).. What make me dissapointed is MC/Orion as reincarnator have future knowledge, but why he doesn't changed many thing (like troll insident, Hagrid dragon egg, etc)?? I understand if he afraid to change so much, but little is fine I think.. And why he join Gryffindor?? If it just to know about the plot, it's failed, he often forget about important event like troll, etc.. He can go to Ravenclaw (he doesn't interest other house) instead, it will make the story more interesting.. Maybe make Hermione and Rose (I like genderbend Harry) join him in Ravenclaw.. Please make them his love interest 😍 Who is Nick Iron?? Can't wait to see his reveal.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

All I'm saying is that the novel is wonderful and no one should listen to the negative comments because they all complain about how quickly the MC gains power. They almost want the MC to become the most powerful magician in the world in twenty chapters.

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Extremely childish writing, to the point where Wattpad authors look mature. There's not much more to say because anything wrong with this book can just be chopped up to be a middle schooler's first attempt at writing anything other than his homework.

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story is terrible mc spends about 90% of the story fixing his magic even though he was a squib. another brain dead "author". storyline was neither interesting or entertaining straight 1/10 stars.

Mc is super weak and gets bullied all the time.

You are stealing others' work and making audiobooks out of them, then you are shamelessly posting them on youtube as one of your patreon membership benefits. Bro, don't be so shameless. How could you possibly do that without their permission and earn from their hard work? Such a thief.

Thr writing is quite bad, unedited and wasn't proofread. The story ain't enticing either, with confusing timelines. Character Design is annoying, the only redeeming feature is there's a dog. I'm not sure about the updates in the long run, seems good so far. World Background is BS. Vampire wizards? arr you freaking kidding me? If vampires could be wizards then Voldemort could easily solve his immortality problem w/o splitting his soul. Also the most famous curse in HP verse reduced to a magic trick. It's Avada Kedavra, not Avra Kadavra.

no offence author but this fiction is really bad. your MC is extremely naive acting like Santa giving gifts left and right. your obsession with granger and potter is disgusting and pedophilic. MC's stupidity is on a whole other level. anyways good luck.