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ErickHenrique_BRLv51yr
2023-12-04 18:21

I didn't like that an AI is manipulating the MC, in fact, it seems that the MC doesn't know how to do anything without the AI, another reason is that it's a technological System but why doesn't everything he does have anything to do with creating technology? It seems more like a help system and not a technological one, if he was just going to learn magic it would be better to put the title as a magic system

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TheFanficGodAuthor

He just learned he is magical. Isn't it normal for System to explain him how to do things? You expect me to throw all character development because of that? He will grow up, mentally, physically, magically and everything else, but he just got his system and learned he is a wizard.

elpepeLv2

concuerdo, no se si harry es el protagonista o la ia

Guri_01_09Lv4

It is taking too long... pick up the pace and get things started author...

TheFanficGod:He just learned he is magical. Isn't it normal for System to explain him how to do things? You expect me to throw all character development because of that? He will grow up, mentally, physically, magically and everything else, but he just got his system and learned he is a wizard.
Zzz_808Lv3

That's not going to happen most patreon authors always hold off on getting readers to subscribe then once they get some money they go tell another story

Guri_01_09:It is taking too long... pick up the pace and get things started author...
literl010Lv1

Just because there's a couple of scammers out there doesn't mean everyone is. Look at this author's history, there are 2 fully completed stories so far.

Zzz_808:That's not going to happen most patreon authors always hold off on getting readers to subscribe then once they get some money they go tell another story
Mann_TeufortianLv4

is the AI malicious? Do you you know yet who created the system, why Harry got it,?

Juan_PelipeLv14

want some spoilers... then where's the mystery will be then.

Mann_Teufortian:is the AI malicious? Do you you know yet who created the system, why Harry got it,?
ErozothDraeorLv6

Thinking AI\power 101, can't have two semi main characters smart, thinking, planning. One has to be the brain and the other has to be walking, like a robot being commanded by the brain.

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