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FlaiverLv41yr
2023-12-05 21:15

I like the novel. But I came to read about Harry Potter and techno-magic, and what I got was a novel about family problems. It was interesting at the beginning but already chapter 13 and the plot is not moving forward. Just to be honest, I don’t care about Pitunya, she’s not an intern to me at all as a person. I hope that this psychology session will end soon and the story about techno-magic will begin.

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TheFanficGodAuthor

Thank you for the review. This part is important for a little arc that is coming. I hope you can bear with me

No_1_islookinLv4

it's like a fight scene from dbz that lasts 8 episodes, that 8 weeks. At some point, we just are like rap it up. no offense

machadogbcLv15

Can you update the auxiliary chapter?

TheFanficGod:Thank you for the review. This part is important for a little arc that is coming. I hope you can bear with me
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