The novel presents an intriguing premise but suffers from poor execution. The dialogue is excessively verbose and often nonsensical, severely impacting the story's credibility. The protagonist, Jon, behaves inconsistently with his supposed age, resembling someone in their late teens or early twenties rather than his actual age (9). This disconnect, alongside poor portrayals of other important characters (including their decisions and dialogue) highlights the author's lack of understanding of the characters, further detracting from the narrative. Additionally, the reliance on the trope of "the old gods granting knowledge" as a convenient explanation undermines the plot's integrity. Overall, a promising idea, but not her more.
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That’s because it’s AI. That’s why this author has such a fast upload speed, regardless of how many stories they are writing. It’s all AI. And people actually pay the author.
Why is everything considered AI nowadays? If it really were AI, why would people support me for almost two years? Be more logical than just saying "AI this, AI that." It’s not that hard to write three chapters a day across six different stories at once. Sure, there might be some mistakes, but I can still make good progress on my stories without much trouble. I also have to admit that I used AI for a couple of months to maybe a year ago when I first discovered how it could be used. I thought it would be interesting—but honestly? It's garbage. Do you have any idea how weird the texts come out? Can’t you see my writing style? I challenge you to find an AI that generates texts like mine. Get your proof straight before claiming everything is AI.
it has gotten better now....but costs a lot of API tokens to write a good chapter XD....if you can run the llms locally or on a server/cloud could work...XD....but plz don't XD
