Plug_O_Stien

I think this novel is still rated three stars too high. The novel goes from slightly promising to incomprehensible nonsense in record time. The first thing to deteriorate is the prose and grammar. Then it becomes a series of diary entries instead of a story. And finally, the decision-making of the Mc to just hand out serums like they're candy became the straw that broke the camel's back. If you read this, Author, I don't blame you for this. You are clearly an amateur learning to write. So use this as a learning experience, read more published novels by great authors, and watch more videos on how to write. Then rewrite this. Hope this serves as a warning for potential readers and as constructive criticism for the author.

that requires knowledge on the subject. something the author seems to be lacking in. smart take though. props to you.

even more so in the new ultimate run. Batman is 6'9, and Wonder Woman praised him for his insane stealth.

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completely agree

keep going. you're doing well.

brainless. I don't know if the author is an idiot or if this is simply a stupid translator, but chapters are constantly being repeated, and a character that was killed came back alive and well several chapters later. It's embarassing to read. I don't recommend this waste of time to anyone.

Over all very close to average. It started off quite decently, kept me invested until the late 60's before it really just seemed to lose sight of the ground under its feet. Very sad to see, but expected with nobles like this. I would recommend this only if you have nothing else to read.

Zero idea about wtf is going on in chapter one lol. It's so poorly written it gave me cancer. This is really bad. You can tell Ai didn't write this because at least the Ai can complete simple sentences. Save yourself the hassle and don't read this.