Plug_O_Stien

First chapter involves the simping ugly duckling (MC) getting NTR'd by his handsome best friend. Not a great start at all. And then, the virgin decides to use his position of power in the next few chapters to sexually harass his maid. I mean, can you be any more of a degenerate piece of trash. I don't recommend this to any sensible human being who hasn't had their mind rotted beyond repair. Good day.

Read 5 chapters and I started to think oncoming traffic simply wanted hugs. Seriously though, this novel fucking socks lmao. Don't bother reading it. The prose is boring, unimaginative and slow. The dialogue is painful to read and needs a ton of work. The main character is just terrible and his IQ drops like 60 points when he's the hulk. It's unbearable to read. I don't recommend this to anyone.

Stolen story. Nowhere does it say that it is translated. I found another novel with the same story saying this guy has stolen more than 25 novels and pretends they are his. Get a life you dog, or better yet, jump off a bridge.

The novel presents an interesting start, with a twist on his actual origins. But it quickly devolves to him acting like a spoiled brat on multiple occasions. I didn't come here to read about a little boy kicking and screaming when he doesn't get his way. The characters fall flat, with the dialogue being stale, too straightforward and overall portraying 2 dimensional personalities. The prose needs a lot of work, and the grammar must be improved. I couldn't get past chapter 4 or 5, his tantrums just killed this for me. I think it's a passable read for those who haven't read better, but it's rather jarring to read personally.

What do you mean?

A very disappointing read. I almost prefer the original Gilderoy over this disguising hypocrite. The main character is two dimensional, a man whore, and a narcissist. His complete disregard for women is unsettling, and his attempt to rationalise it is rather pathetic. His goals are non existent or all over the place, he has tremendous emotional swings and his actions are incredibly unrealistic. He is a fraud, a manipulator and a sadist. I wish I had never wasted my time on this talentless work. My recommendation? Don't read.

This is a novel with average potential wasted on a talentless author. The characters fall flat, the story stagnates and the world just feels small, like it revolves solely around the gravity of the main character's narrative. It's not all bad, the sole thing that sustained this novel through the bulk of the mindless and repetitive crap was the hilarious inclusion of the dancing genjutsu. It is the best thing in this novel hands down and always got a good laugh out of me. But... that's as far as it goes. There are plot holes throughout this story concerning his power, his unwillingness to use it, and his personality completely killing off any interesting plot. There are so many opportunities for him to have meaningful connections, and experience loss and joy, and instead the author pathetically turtles, cowering behind the character's lazy and irrational fears to keep the plot the same. It grinds my gears to encounter writers with such little love for their works, it's beyond disheartening and more than a little pathetic. Over all, I think there is so much here for an interesting story, and I have seen the opportunity to make this amazing. Unfortunately, it has been wasted. Read this if you want to pass the time, but it is not something that can be rated about average (3 stars). It is underserving of more on account of the Author.

I just checked, it counts hours spent reading on app only. Not on google which I use.

For some reason it doesn't update. I don't know why, I'm on this sight daily.

Over all an objectively BAD story. Writing quality is below average with poor prose and terrible structure. Update stability is spotty and not consistent. Story development takes a nose dive post chapter 15. And Brandon letting omni-man get away is so forced I couldn't keep reading. Your story is an insult to superman's power level, and your execution is for shit. Character design is also awful. No clear motivation for why he wants to become a hero except a ridiculous "feeling" he has when he thinks about it. Don't make me laugh you clown. World background is non existent and relies entirely on the readers knowledge of the plot and world. Nor is it expanded upon at all in 25 fucking chapters. Over all an insulting interpretation of superman's powers in this world, and a plot slave too scared to change anything worth a damn.