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this story has some problems with logic... and the way people act/ behave is like in a book for kids...the pov changes in the same pharagraph ... and other stuff....

Idk, the paceing and writing style kinda throws me off, it seems kinda unnatural or kinda robotic.

The novel presents an intriguing premise but suffers from poor execution. The dialogue is excessively verbose and often nonsensical, severely impacting the story's credibility. The protagonist, Jon, behaves inconsistently with his supposed age, resembling someone in their late teens or early twenties rather than his actual age (9). This disconnect, alongside poor portrayals of other important characters (including their decisions and dialogue) highlights the author's lack of understanding of the characters, further detracting from the narrative. Additionally, the reliance on the trope of "the old gods granting knowledge" as a convenient explanation undermines the plot's integrity. Overall, a promising idea, but not her more.

I really have mixed feelings about this fic, I really like kingdom building and the prospect of a kingdom beyond the wall really attracts me, I think the story has a lot of potential. however, it really bothers me the way catelyn and ned are portrayed, catelyn is portrayed as executively disgusting, much worse than she should be, and ned, is portrayed as if he had no fault of his own, a literal saint, and jon idolizes him... which is really stupid, other than that, the story is really good, I really hope to see the end.

amazing story I hope author will continue this story with no stopping [img=update]

Honestly was one of the best ASOIAF stories out there but because people didn’t understand that this was a Fanfic they got dissatisfied with the current story so those people can f right off!!! Author you are a fantastic author and I follow your other stories and never let these people that only spend time tearing others down to fill there so called pride. Hope you continue this later on in the future and sorry you had to take those comments and anything else!! Keep up your writing because you will go so far with it!!!

Dude Pleaseeee!!!!!!!!!!! don't delete this, I was eagerly waiting for its updates. Atleast, continue posting it on some other platform. This is the best Ongoing GOT fanfictions. Your work is great. Please resume posting it!

Bring this back please[img=update][img=recommend]